| "The Legend Of the Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mmind On: November 03, 2006 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not very original. There where some grammer mistakes and I'm sure a 12 year old would not think " Bulma couldn't believe this was happening, she locked up, she felt numb…would her life ever be the same? Would she ever have hope again?" When her father gets killed infront of her.
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Reviewed By: tjsa On: October 02, 2006 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why don't you finish it? i like it alot.
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Title: PLLEEAAASSEE
Reviewed By: zonkiethegreat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 23:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!! THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 20:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
LOve it!!!
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Title: Ohh!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez this is getting uber angsty, edge of the seater though. Bulma really needs help and someone really needs to hit Vegeta! I so want to know what happens!
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Title: Waiting
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 09:28 EDT
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I truely like this story, but i'm just so tired of wanting these two to be together. I know thats the way the story has to go, but every chance they get something always gets in their way. *sighs* great chapter i really hope that vegeta figures out something is wrong with bulma!!!!
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Title: demonwitch
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more chapters please! wonderful so far!!
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Title: awesomeness
Reviewed By: zonkiethegreat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 03:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic slave au! very intense! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: 8662 On: June 01, 2006 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it's refreshing.Yes there have been other slave fic's ,yet not one has really hooked me as your story has done.I look forward to every update to find out what happens next in the storyline.Hope you update soon.
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Title: MORE
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more! more! more! more! more! MORE!!!! put out another chapter!!! and soon!!!!! ok thnaks hoep to see it soon byes!!!
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Title: OH MY
Reviewed By: DRAMA On: May 16, 2006 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHH drama! lol I really like this fic, I've been with it for awhile now. I think you're doing a bang-up job, it's bloody fantastic. I really love the AU and how you've sort of made it your own. I'm dying for them to just COME TOGETHER though!! lol...I am totally in love with this and hanging on your every word, so please continue!!! Don't let me fall...! lol
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Reviewed By: ZOLA22 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. glad to see you updated.
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Reviewed By: Melak On: April 20, 2006 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: dbzfan On: April 19, 2006 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please- i thought thee was more to the story. thanks
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Title: Necklace?.....
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is intense. When are they going to get over themselves? I am so excited to find out what happens next! Please update soon!
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