| "The Legend Of the Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbzfan On: April 19, 2006 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please- i thought thee was more to the story. thanks
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Title: Necklace?.....
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is intense. When are they going to get over themselves? I am so excited to find out what happens next! Please update soon!
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Title: Great, Continue
Reviewed By: PHISH On: April 12, 2006 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite good, I really enjoy it. Please continue with it, it's too good to leave hanging. I applaud you.
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 00:14 EDT
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i love this story please update
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 21, 2006 02:05 EST
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Ah, I read too fast but am now rushing to go out. Like it very much, will come back to read it again slowly tonight.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: tin797@yahoo.com.sg On: February 26, 2006 14:17 EST
Comment/Review:
1.hi, i noticed lesser spelling errors in this chapter, probably because you have used a spellcheck, very good improvement! However the spellcheck cannot spot wrong words, I spotted a few, maybe I will email you later, hope you do not feel offended. 2.I feel that your Bulma is not as revengeful or hateful as those in other slave fic, it is a welcomed change for me. Though so, I think it is still neccessary to touch on more of Bulma's thinking, especially this part where she has decided to work for Vegetasei and for the rebellion, despite the enslavement and the purging of her planet. I like how you protray the young couple too, their characters are not too dark, but their loneliness & confusions are still heartbreaking to read. 3.In my opinion, the first BV confrontation in this chapter is not very convincing, as in the reasons given by Vegeta. The gravity arguement seems out of place as a dialogue. This part of the plot is not as well done as the romance in eariler chapters, the violent kiss is also a bit weirdly written, but the BV chemistry is still here. 4.Overall, I love this story, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Utsukushi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 08:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall I enjoy your story. I think the idea incorporates a lot of good ideas. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. I do think that your writing style flows farely well, but is sometimes interrupted by spelling and a few grammar mistakes. My suggestion is to be care of homonyms. Maybe get someone to help you edit the chapter.
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Title: Write more
Reviewed By: wwediva On: February 24, 2006 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i beg of you 2 please write more. i love this story and its not fair you just ended it like that. PLEASE PLEASE I BEG OF U WRITE MORE.
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Reviewed By: Blue Haired Beauty On: February 22, 2006 10:14 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! I'm lovin' it! Please update soon and often! ;0)
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Reviewed By: Hi On: February 21, 2006 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally freaking awesome. Please write again soon!! You are fantastic. (I agree about the beta reader thing, but it's not too terrible by any means.)
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Reviewed By: me On: February 21, 2006 07:06 EST
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We are reading! It will take a while for new fics to get noticed, but this one is great! Will give more detailed review once I've gone through with all the existing chapters. By the way, I discovered your fic through here:http://s8.invisionfree.com/DBZ_Fanfic_Salon/index.php?showtopic=5395
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Reviewed By: Blackcat16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 12:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has a great start. I would love for you to keep going.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 02:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think the story is great so far and i deffinatly want to read more so keep going, come out with the next chapter soon :)
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Reviewed By: ZOLA22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 12:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. The B/V fics were becoming a bit tiresome for me but this one is really good. Please continue & update soon.
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Reviewed By: Andromeda2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im loving the story. Your a great writer! I think you need a beta reader to help with spelling and grammar. Otherwise its great
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