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Title: Cookies!!!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: April 27, 2006 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ Update soon for more yamyams!
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Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah! I've been waiting for almost 2 months for an update and you leave me hanging like this? (*cries at unfairness of it all*) I hope you update soon to rectify this miscarrige of justice (*sniffles*)
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Reviewed By: killer_sprite On: April 02, 2006 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! Wow I haven't written a review outside of my groups in a really long time and I think that you do belong to one of the same groups that I do so I've no idea why I'm reviewing here instead of there. *shrugs* Aannnywho... this is a really good fic. I love all of your S/J stuff and HOUNDS is shaping up to be one of your best yet. That said, you need to update, seriously. I'm completely hooked on this one. You piqued my interest in it with that teaser A/N about it in I've Wanted You Forever and Tonight. (which also totally rocked btw) I love the way you torture and abuse the really pretty boys, especially Jou. *insert diabolical laughter here* Please update soon?!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 06:01 EST
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Yami and Seto are going to be fighting over Jounouchi? This will be good. Obviously, Jounouchi doesn't believe that Yami's been around that long. This was great, I just knew he was Bruce. I hope Yami gets rid of his drug habits soon for everyone's sake.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Little Yugi is the big bad Mutouh. That's really great and different. I kind of like Ryuuji, he's kind of cute. Poor jounouchi I hope he doesn't get into trouble on his own.
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Title: *GASPERZES!!!!*
Reviewed By: happyDragon(logged out) On: February 24, 2006 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My question has been answered! (Granted I'm a few weeks too late to fully appreciate it; sorry for that. ^^;;) Thank you for clearing that up! And no problems with the chapter again, yay! Ah, yeah, the guy's probably dead, but we won't know until you tell us. O.O! Woah . . . Yami's past is . . . . woah . . . . . . . AHHH!!! No! Evil Peoples With The Chloroform To Kidnap Yami!!!! Ahhhh . . . . I'm all excited about what's going to happen next now, and how everyone else who hasn't shown up yet fits into this. ::Sniff:: Guess I'll just have to wait until the next part is ready. Hell yeah! We kept Seto out of the monastery! Well, Good Luck! I'll try to be more constructive next time! (Only thing I could think of this time was 'Who's the Goddess?' but she's probably made up anyway, and even if she isn't it doesn't affect the story.)
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 03:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved yami's history. It explains a lot. I hope The Mutouh wiill be in the next chapter, although I suspect that he is the one who ordered Yami's kidnapping.. This is really great.
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Reviewed By: ~Kitten On: February 11, 2006 13:14 EST
Comment/Review:
I swear if Seto joins a monestary i'll freak. There can never be a guy like Seto in a monestary. All the other monks would be gay by the end of the year.
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Title: Donation to the “Don’t let Seto join a monastery foundation.”
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: January 31, 2006 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! It Uploaded Right!!!!!! Well all that aside, this universe rocks. First of all, I love that it's like a detective/crime story/mystery thriller. Yes it's dark--which I like--but it's still funny--which I really like. XD I'm seeing all sorts of different threads that you're putting out, plot hooks and the like, but I have a few things I'm wondering about, because I may simply just be confused. 1) It's important that Joey doesn't kill his opponents, or her gets charged with murder, thrown in jail, and thus becomes ineligible to become a HOUNDS, right? So if the medics were running in to patch up the wolf, and the Hot Fangs started a stamped, what are the odds that the wolf lived? Yeah, maybe it's a plot hook you had planed on for the future, maybe it's blackmail Seto will use . . . and then Mokie will tell him that Joey saved him and the story can get more complicated from there. 2) Speaking of Mokuba, is it just me, or did you describe a kid with the Hot Fangs that had hair and eyes like Mokie? Black ponytail, winter gray eyes . . . ponytail comes undone in the rush . . . But maybe I'm confused. 3) Now I know I'm lost here, you keep using the term therianthrope, and you've just said it's different from a lycanthrope. Now maybe lycanthrope means only werewolves, but you've called both Joey and Yami that, and since they're both different were-types . . . think we could ever get a definition/explanation of what a "therian" is? Even if it's just a link to a site, or a little A/N? I can't wait to see the look on Joey's face when he finds out Seto's a snake. XD . . . which begs the question of what Mokuba is . . . and how Yuugi fits into all this given that the Mutohs = the mob . . . I almost wonder what the hell he'll be. Maybe a bunny or bird or something cute but dangerous, like a porcupine or spiny-ant-eater/echidna or hedgehog! {No, I'm not a Sonic The Hedgehog fan, not at all ::Shifty Eyes::.} Still, I'll be here for the next chapter! Good Luck!
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Title: Kyaaa!!!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 29, 2006 09:35 EST
Comment/Review:
The first bit of SetoxJoey action! Of course I don't want Seto to become a monk, hurray for the smut! -waves little flags that say smut in big blck letters- I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter, so we can see what's going on with the guns!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 06:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At least Seto picked up his cues. The kiss was great. I would like to see them together even more. More Yami too.
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Title: MM.org doesn't like this fic.
Reviewed By: happydragon(logged out) On: January 28, 2006 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, but it looks like it didn't want to upload right again. I hope you have better luck with either re-uploading this one, or posting the next one. Bah, I'd review more if I had the time. Still, just know that I love this and all you're other works (not blindly, I'll point stuff out if I think it needs highlighting).
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Title: *sobs*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 28, 2006 09:53 EST
Comment/Review:
You're so mean! I really like this story, but whenever it says it's updated it's only like, this little tidbit of the chapter! Please fix soon!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 08:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great. I really, really like it.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 12:15 EST
Comment/Review:
This is really good. Is Jounouchi Bruce? Since Bruce hurt his paw and Jounouchis got a bad ankle I just wondered. This was great.
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