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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 08:39 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great update. Little Yugi is the big bad Mutouh. That's really great and different. I kind of like Ryuuji, he's kind of cute. Poor jounouchi I hope he doesn't get into trouble on his own.
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Title: *GASPERZES!!!!* Reviewed By: happyDragon(logged out) On: February 24, 2006 22:16 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: My question has been answered! (Granted I'm a few weeks too late to fully appreciate it; sorry for that. ^^;;) Thank you for clearing that up! And no problems with the chapter again, yay! Ah, yeah, the guy's probably dead, but we won't know until you tell us. O.O! Woah . . . Yami's past is . . . . woah . . . . . . . AHHH!!! No! Evil Peoples With The Chloroform To Kidnap Yami!!!! Ahhhh . . . . I'm all excited about what's going to happen next now, and how everyone else who hasn't shown up yet fits into this. ::Sniff:: Guess I'll just have to wait until the next part is ready. Hell yeah! We kept Seto out of the monastery! Well, Good Luck! I'll try to be more constructive next time! (Only thing I could think of this time was 'Who's the Goddess?' but she's probably made up anyway, and even if she isn't it doesn't affect the story.)
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 03:29 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved yami's history. It explains a lot. I hope The Mutouh wiill be in the next chapter, although I suspect that he is the one who ordered Yami's kidnapping.. This is really great.
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Reviewed By: ~Kitten On: February 11, 2006 13:14 EST Comment/Review: I swear if Seto joins a monestary i'll freak. There can never be a guy like Seto in a monestary. All the other monks would be gay by the end of the year.
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Title: Donation to the “Don’t let Seto join a monastery foundation.” Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: January 31, 2006 19:56 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! It Uploaded Right!!!!!! Well all that aside, this universe rocks. First of all, I love that it's like a detective/crime story/mystery thriller. Yes it's dark--which I like--but it's still funny--which I really like. XD I'm seeing all sorts of different threads that you're putting out, plot hooks and the like, but I have a few things I'm wondering about, because I may simply just be confused. 1) It's important that Joey doesn't kill his opponents, or her gets charged with murder, thrown in jail, and thus becomes ineligible to become a HOUNDS, right? So if the medics were running in to patch up the wolf, and the Hot Fangs started a stamped, what are the odds that the wolf lived? Yeah, maybe it's a plot hook you had planed on for the future, maybe it's blackmail Seto will use . . . and then Mokie will tell him that Joey saved him and the story can get more complicated from there. 2) Speaking of Mokuba, is it just me, or did you describe a kid with the Hot Fangs that had hair and eyes like Mokie? Black ponytail, winter gray eyes . . . ponytail comes undone in the rush . . . But maybe I'm confused. 3) Now I know I'm lost here, you keep using the term therianthrope, and you've just said it's different from a lycanthrope. Now maybe lycanthrope means only werewolves, but you've called both Joey and Yami that, and since they're both different were-types . . . think we could ever get a definition/explanation of what a "therian" is? Even if it's just a link to a site, or a little A/N? I can't wait to see the look on Joey's face when he finds out Seto's a snake. XD . . . which begs the question of what Mokuba is . . . and how Yuugi fits into all this given that the Mutohs = the mob . . . I almost wonder what the hell he'll be. Maybe a bunny or bird or something cute but dangerous, like a porcupine or spiny-ant-eater/echidna or hedgehog! {No, I'm not a Sonic The Hedgehog fan, not at all ::Shifty Eyes::.} Still, I'll be here for the next chapter! Good Luck!
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Title: Kyaaa!!! Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 29, 2006 09:35 EST Comment/Review: The first bit of SetoxJoey action! Of course I don't want Seto to become a monk, hurray for the smut! -waves little flags that say smut in big blck letters- I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter, so we can see what's going on with the guns!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 06:35 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: At least Seto picked up his cues. The kiss was great. I would like to see them together even more. More Yami too.
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Title: MM.org doesn't like this fic. Reviewed By: happydragon(logged out) On: January 28, 2006 19:26 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this fic, but it looks like it didn't want to upload right again. I hope you have better luck with either re-uploading this one, or posting the next one. Bah, I'd review more if I had the time. Still, just know that I love this and all you're other works (not blindly, I'll point stuff out if I think it needs highlighting).
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Title: *sobs* Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 28, 2006 09:53 EST Comment/Review: You're so mean! I really like this story, but whenever it says it's updated it's only like, this little tidbit of the chapter! Please fix soon!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 08:17 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is really great. I really, really like it.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 12:15 EST Comment/Review: This is really good. Is Jounouchi Bruce? Since Bruce hurt his paw and Jounouchis got a bad ankle I just wondered. This was great.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 05:31 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a better first chapter. Helps a lot. I really like it.
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Title: Oo?;; Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: January 17, 2006 21:15 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm sorry that I had to put all '1's, but my comp wants me to fill in all the fields. Anyway . . . . I'm interested, but the chapter uploaded funny. It's only the size of a teaser and cuts off in the middle of a sentence. Hopefully you'll be able to fix it.
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Title: looks good Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 17, 2006 06:45 EST Comment/Review: It looks good, but the chapters are a little bit weird. Just thought you might want to take a look, is all ^_~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 05:23 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good, a little confusing but good. Update soon.
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