| "Insanity" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ShiShi On: January 20, 2008 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like ur story line alot! its different. cant wait till sasuke comes in
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Title: onegai
Reviewed By: firekitten On: February 06, 2007 16:45 CST
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onegai update. pleasepleasepleaseplease. u know u want to. all the other writers r doing it.
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Title: cooool
Reviewed By: firekitten On: October 26, 2006 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love thisidea u should continue. i want to know if naruto ever gets to get close to gaara because that would be aswome. well i dont like to wright long reviewsd so in short i like it and cant wait for an update. this idea is kinda original.please continue. arigato fof the ff
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 16:52 CDT
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this is soooo..... KOOL!!! update realy soon!!! plz.
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Reviewed By: bishifangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 17:46 CDT
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oh...man! I really want to read the rest of this! I love stories where the characters are in an insane asylem!
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Reviewed By: Scream On: July 31, 2006 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The originality of the story is amazing. The first few paragraphs got my full attention and stayed that way. I would really like it if you continued the story. C:
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Reviewed By: Taes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 11:07 CDT
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Wah, I forgot...this doesn't really have much to do with anything but details, but voices from the inside (that Naruto thinks of as being himself) is DID, disasosiative identity disorder (formally known as "multiple personality disorder"), whereas schizophrenia is hearing voices from the /outside/, and the main person reacting to those voices. If Naruto is just walking along, and hears someone "else" saying, "you should kill yourself," that's schizophrenia. If he actually takes the blade to his wrist, and then later has no recollection of this 'cause "the other Naruto/Kyuubi did it" that's DID (disasosiative identity disorder). Hey, if you're stuck? Maybe you should read a book on DID or schizophrenia...there are some really good ones. :) like, "The Flock." For schizophrenia, "The Lost Five Years" is...mah, okay...
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Reviewed By: Taes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 10:58 CDT
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Interesting idea...hope you continue. It'd be cool to have such an informed (on mental disorders) fic continued. *Hopeful* more, if you don't mind?
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Reviewed By: yimad On: March 19, 2006 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it i lik the story line n i like how gaara and naruto help each other out...i was just wondering if u could go into further detail about wuts wrong with each person cuz i kno naruto's got 2 personalitys cuz of kyuubi and neji is blind but gaara i cant rele tell, so could u explain that further next chappie? thanx :3
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Title: Master of all thing Burrito
Reviewed By: Burritto-Sempai On: February 03, 2006 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd say I loved you, but I don't know you... So, I'll love this story in place of you. It's really good.
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