| "An Unexpected Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: shuichi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D i like it! tis cute! ^_^
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: Koji Io Nokemono On: February 18, 2007 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry to say I don't proof read ;_; I need to get typing a lot more so maybe I could find a beta reader..... *faints*
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Title: So Nanba
Reviewed By: Iarejedi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. It was a little rough in some parts where it needed to flow a little better. However it was hot because the thought of those two together...holy crap. You get brownie points for it. :D You did a good job. Thanks for the good read. :D
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Reviewed By: Koji Io Nokemono On: February 21, 2006 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
If I ever extend it.......we'll see :)
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: February 21, 2006 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
YES!!! i loved it!! i always wanted to read a nanba/umeda fic but i could nver find one, so THANK YOU!! but still did it have to be a bet?? ......... at least they got it on ehhehe
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Title: there's a title?
Reviewed By: Koji Io Nokemono On: January 28, 2006 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
that actually gives me an idea if I ever decide to expand on it... it's be rather spiteful, which is the only thing but nonetheless.... *mebe I'd move this to angst or drama then* heheh
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 28, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was a very nice fin and i really did love it.. I liked the parring and wish u had told who Umeda made the bet with..I think that that would yhave been funny depending on who it was..^-^
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