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Title: LOVEEEE
Reviewed By: yanyan On: May 16, 2015 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fact that not all fanfics about Tsukasa and Tsukushi are
so... you know, 'conservatively' written. This shows another side
of my favorite couple in the manga world. MORE PLEASE!
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story, and especially the ending. sincerely, seacil
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Reviewed By: Hoshi Kouchu On: December 05, 2006 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am that of die hard HYD fans, and I liked your story very much. Your writing style is amazing, and the content, let's say doesn't even have to be AU - it can be for example Tsukasa's dreams
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Reviewed By: MaSucree [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so loving your stuff. All so very steamy and just *sigh* I do like how you got Tsukasa's character right and the fact that Tsukishi left Rui was even better *evil grin* lol. Brilliant.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: iron kitty1 On: August 09, 2006 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastically written, great job in capturing Tsukasa's possessive nature... it's funny how they've done it everywhere but a bed ^_^. The endearing parts where the ones that described the feelings behind the... urge... to rut ^_^. Great read.
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Reviewed By: LadyCs [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this!! I'm a die-hard HYD fan but fanfics are fanfics and in an AU where the F$ and Tsukshi are older I could see it kinda happining. lol. I mean come on in the HYD movie (which is AU) Tsukasa was in a leotard dancing!! lol. So lol saying that I understand about the AU and so don't worry about it!! =D and if anyone says this isn't good because its not in the proper universe, or to detailed with the sex (which >.> was very Tsukasa and
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 00:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, delicious!!! XD XD XD I was so worried, no one was writing smutty HYD, which lead me to believe that no one was inspired to, which then made me cry........but then I found this! ^__________~ I absolutely, totally enjoyed this, a perfect 10. Onegai.......write more! *huggles SuKiss and gives her double-chocolate chip cookies*
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Reviewed By: Woot On: January 20, 2006 20:28 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh, I really liked this! Your Doumyouji was perfect
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Sylvia Marri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 14:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Besides being wonderfully written, I like the premise behind the act. I never liked those things that just go "bump in the dark" and the writers don't give sufficient reason why it happened. You didn't even have to write "Tsukasa felt... or Tsukusi was feeling..." but the careful use of action words helped establish the deeper feelings that Tsukasa and Tsukusi have for each other. So for those reasons, I commend this story. It didn't sound dirty, it was sweet without being too fluffy. Congratulations. :)
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