| "The Aroma of Spring" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Yinfei On: July 10, 2008 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last line was genius. Props. And there isn't nearly enough hot Kyo/Yuya porn out there, so props, again. Overall, a very nice PWP, even if a tiny bit anatomically improbable. (No one comes that fast. Believe me.) Except--and this has bothered me forever--he ties her arms behind her back, and then takes off her yukata. Logistical slip-up. But the last line makes up for everything. And Yuya would be the type to have a bondage fetish^^
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Title: cha!
Reviewed By: Draculina_666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!!!! i love this story!
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Reviewed By: shin chin chan On: February 04, 2006 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, a follow up would be totally fine.
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Reviewed By: Always Sometimes Never [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job! The end was funny and it was all around enjoyable. I hope to see more from you. ^^
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Title: Ha
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
That ending line was funny. Nice PWP lemon.
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