| "Beautiful Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!! ^0^ Good ending to a great story! You updated a lot quicker than I thought. Which is good. So.....are you going to write any other G/V stories? I hope you do. If not...oh well. Anyways, I loved this story, but I hate that now it's over. TOO BAD.(SOBS) So...basically, I loved this story, it was a great ending, and also I hope you write another G/V! BYE!^^
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Title: Good chapter!!^0^
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still think that a title is stupid.-_- Anyways, cute ^0^ Videl being a godmother to Vegeta and Bulma's daughter. Bad for Gohan though. He feels heartbreak since she is going back to Earth to cure her father. I feel sorry for him...for now anyways. T.T I can't belive that it's almost over.Only 2more chapters. (sobs) Well when you finish this one are you going to write another Gohan/Videl. Cause I don't think there are enough of Gohan/Videl here. There are lots of Gohan and other...but it's almost all YAOI and I don't like YAOI. No offence if you like it. Anyways, I love GOHAN/VIDEL only, and I like this story becuase it's G/V. Also it's a good story.^0^ Update soon.
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Wow! Gohan found out who Videl was and is starting to have FEELINGS. That's so cute I hope you write the next chapter just as soon as this one. OH PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
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Title: -_-So stupid to put a title
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
-_-Stupid title. Anyways, WHAT TOOK YOU SOOOOO LONG. It was like what over a week maybe over two. I hate waiting for the good stories to come out. The bad stories I go 'I don't care if they update or not', but this isn't like that. I waited for this story to update for every day. I went on the computer every day and looked to see if you updated and you didn't. I read this story yesterday but I was too lazy yesterday so I didn' review it. Anyways, it's good and I'm glad Gohan found out that Dameon(or Videl) is a girl. ^0^Funny way to find out!!LOL LOL LOL!!!! Wow! Videl has a crush on Gohan. I thought that he would find out much later but I guess I was wrong. I want to know how the romance between them starts. -_-Don't take too long to update. I hate waiting, and I wish that you could finish this story in one daym but you can't. T.T Well UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Title: Why do we need a title?
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do we even need a title? Sorry... Anyways good chapters. people here don't update as much as people in fanfiction. but than fanfiction is so mean taking people off of the site. but hey... I'll update.^-^ Unless you don't want me too. Than I won't. Write SOON PLEASE. I did wait for the other chapter..I just didn't update... but now I will for every chapter... of course again if you don't want ME to do it for EVERY chapter than that's ok.^0^
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Title: Good Chapter
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter... BUT..... WHAT TOOK YOU SOOOO...LONG... Ok maybe it wasn't TOOO long for 'other people' but for me 10 days are PRETTY long time. Like I said before good chapter and this time I hope you take at least only about 5 days... of course that is unless something terrible has happened, then I could 'TRY' and wait. But it's not guarenteed.^0^ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON............!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: First Reviewer(I think)
Reviewed By: gohny1129 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! I guess I'm your first reviewer!!! I think... other than that this is my first review in this site. Anyways I think it's a great story. I don't know why other people aren't reviewing. They must just be lazy. Anyways I just want to say that this is a good story and you should continue this story and update quickly because I can't wait long for the next chapter. I will die if that happens. Like some of the good fanfictions in fanfiction.net but they don't update or they make me wait forever and I DON'T WANT YOU TO BE LIKE THAT!!!!! or face the consequences of me never reviewing your stories. HUMPH!!!^0^ LOL I hope you update soon. I'll be here waiting for the next chapter.
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