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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until you update your story! I love it so much! Very well written, and it's definatly going on my favorites list! U are too! ^^ -Mitsuko
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor(NLI) On: June 25, 2006 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very glad you posted! I loved how Kagome realized that Inuyasha was her mystery man. And a dream world? Sounds fun! It was very well-written, and I loved all of it! Please keep up the good work! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Picket On: June 24, 2006 05:35 CDT
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I love it, I love it, I love it... thankyou for brightning my evening!
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 19:53 CDT
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The world you have created is absolutely fun to sink into! The setting is well thought out and believable with the details given. When Kag figures out *finally* the mystery dream man, you left a wonderful cliffie for us. - One anticipated action completes while another presents itself at the end of chap 6. The time line gets a little wonky to me as far as how long they have been "investigating." It feels like a week's worth, but I read it all as a straight shot. Which does feel a little fast for what we've gotten to...but hey it could also be the Friday nite drink I'm having as a read a great story. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 23, 2006 18:22 CDT
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Magnificent chapter. That was quite a sudden shift, it seems that this world is even more complex than at first thought, I have to wonder what this all means... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Picket On: June 15, 2006 06:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so excellent, please continue to write!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: leyley On: June 02, 2006 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: New Age
Reviewed By: Tati86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, when are you planning to post the next chapter? You have my best friend and me completely insane of waiting. This InuYasha's so sexy. I so love your story and you just have to leave us with that major cliffhanger. Please update soon!!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 21, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... he might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works (cause he's soooo SEXY!). Can't wait till next update! and...just...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA IS SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want him for my birthday, not just a chapter! (but i thank u 4 the chapter ^_^) Luv ya!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:28 CDT
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I agree with kinuski-chan. How do the swear machines know he's swearing? Are they programmed for all kinds of languages? That would explain it! Anyways! I love this story! It's so awesome! I've already read DarkWorld and Transformations! Those were both awesome! Just like this story! OMG! Inu's a perv! LOL! What if he and Miroku switched personalities in the series?! That would be hilarious but anyways! Please update soon! Please!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 02, 2006 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!!
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: Kinuski-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 07:51 CDT
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I was just wondering, if Inuyasha is speaking Japanese and others are speaking that new language, how that swear machine knew Inuyasha was swearing? Sorry for bad spelling, I'm foreiger.
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Reviewed By: randomjustpassingby On: May 01, 2006 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing and so hilariously funny!!! I really hope you update soon *puppy eyes* Looking forward to the next chappie!!!!
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Title: Interesting to a definate point. :D
Reviewed By: Midnight_EvE On: April 30, 2006 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Once I started to read the story I couldn't stop. Its really really really interesting. I hope that you update soon. :D
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:49 CDT
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Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update!
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