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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: April 30, 2006 21:26 CDT
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wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed today (April 30 2006) AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA IS SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want him for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is May 5th :-D just thought i'd tell you that. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. HE'S SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok bye
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Reviewed By: viz On: April 30, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in agreement with Jewelbrat2. I wish you would updte more then once a month on this story, but seeing you have other stories you work we have no choose but to wait. (sign) Anyway all in all another great chapter. Keep it up. Keep up the good writing Viz
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 30, 2006 20:17 CDT
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wow, steamy! hehe very good job. ive been waiting on this update, i absolutely adore this story.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 30, 2006 19:01 CDT
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Magnificent chapter once again. I wonder what these latest developments could mean... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: April 23, 2006 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PlEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOO MUCH YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW (OR COULD EVEN GUESS). PPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSE??????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????!
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. And very different. I like the whole concept ya got going here. Update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: viz On: April 03, 2006 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't ask writers to hurry up and updte because I beleive it is very rude. But this one time I will be rude. PLEASE update faseer than a month. I don't think I can what that long. Another great chapter by the way
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 02, 2006 18:59 CDT
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Excellent chapter once again. I wonder how long it will take him to break the swear machine again... Rather worrying that they wanted all of those samples...it makes you wonder what it is they plan to do with him now. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: THANK YOU (for updating)!
Reviewed By: Kinuski-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is GREAT!! Im so happy that you updated! When I found this months ago I couldnt help but thought that you abadoned it! THANK YOU!!!
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Title: great stories
Reviewed By: viz On: April 01, 2006 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read all of your Inuyasha stories and loved them. This one no exception. Your wirting get better everytime.
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Reviewed By: ANMRELBD On: March 24, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FANTASTIC!!!!!!! I really liked the story and I am curious about what is gonna happen. PWEETY PWEASE FINISH PWEASE!I SAID FINISH DANGIT,please! Come on I'm on knees beggin, here!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 02, 2006 19:20 CST
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Excellent chapter once again. Have to love the inclusion of the Demolition Man type swear detector. Even more fun that he actually broke it! I look forwards to seeing what new troubles await them. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: bricks435 On: March 02, 2006 17:04 CST
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Smile....^_^ awesome!I am really interested what is going to happen...if inu has the same dreams and what the last one was about. see you in a month...if that is your pattern. bricks
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor(not logged in) On: March 02, 2006 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! just can't get enough! love his personality...how it fits in. i've always liked ayumi best of all of kagome's present time friends too. well, i dont have any suggestions, i cant think of anything wrong! cant wait for the next chapter, this story is awesome!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:15 CST
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Excellent chapter once again. So, he is awake now, one moment nice and the next aggressive...I wonder, what more surprises await and more over what will happen now that someone else is there to see him awake. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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