| "New Age" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Picket On: June 15, 2006 06:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so excellent, please continue to write!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: leyley On: June 02, 2006 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: New Age
Reviewed By: Tati86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, when are you planning to post the next chapter? You have my best friend and me completely insane of waiting. This InuYasha's so sexy. I so love your story and you just have to leave us with that major cliffhanger. Please update soon!!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 21, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!! and...Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... he might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works (cause he's soooo SEXY!). Can't wait till next update! and...just...wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed. AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA IS SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want him for my birthday, not just a chapter! (but i thank u 4 the chapter ^_^) Luv ya!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with kinuski-chan. How do the swear machines know he's swearing? Are they programmed for all kinds of languages? That would explain it! Anyways! I love this story! It's so awesome! I've already read DarkWorld and Transformations! Those were both awesome! Just like this story! OMG! Inu's a perv! LOL! What if he and Miroku switched personalities in the series?! That would be hilarious but anyways! Please update soon! Please!
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Title: BEGGING
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: May 02, 2006 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOO LONG FOR THE STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!PLE ASE!!! PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!LEASE!!!PLEASE!!!
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: Kinuski-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 07:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was just wondering, if Inuyasha is speaking Japanese and others are speaking that new language, how that swear machine knew Inuyasha was swearing? Sorry for bad spelling, I'm foreiger.
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Reviewed By: randomjustpassingby On: May 01, 2006 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing and so hilariously funny!!! I really hope you update soon *puppy eyes* Looking forward to the next chappie!!!!
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Title: Interesting to a definate point. :D
Reviewed By: Midnight_EvE On: April 30, 2006 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Once I started to read the story I couldn't stop. Its really really really interesting. I hope that you update soon. :D
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. So good. So good. I can't even describe the elation I felt when I got the notice that this had been updated, and then the even greater elation after reading this chapter. I wish I had some criticism... they might be moving a little too quickly, but somehow that works. Can't wait till next update!
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: April 30, 2006 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow... I really like your story.. I just read the chapter u posed today (April 30 2006) AHHHH YOU JUST LEFT IT THERE!!??? *sobs uncontrollably* Mother F&*%er! (not you.. just a comment) INUYASHA IS SO DAMN SEXY IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY!!!! I want him for my birthday! (or at least another chapter) My b- day is May 5th :-D just thought i'd tell you that. And wow.. I wish I was living this story or something.. HE'S SO HOT! sorry...I'm better now.. ok I'm gonna go before I start drooling all over my keyboard. Please add more chapters! Lemony even! :-D ok bye
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Reviewed By: viz On: April 30, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in agreement with Jewelbrat2. I wish you would updte more then once a month on this story, but seeing you have other stories you work we have no choose but to wait. (sign) Anyway all in all another great chapter. Keep it up. Keep up the good writing Viz
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 30, 2006 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, steamy! hehe very good job. ive been waiting on this update, i absolutely adore this story.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 30, 2006 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Magnificent chapter once again. I wonder what these latest developments could mean... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: April 23, 2006 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PlEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOO MUCH YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW (OR COULD EVEN GUESS). PPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSE??????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????!
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