Reviewed By: Blu_Munky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I am currently working on my second fanfic. both o mine are altenate Universe. I kno it's hard to stay in character, and you did good. I didn't quite undestand the pheonix thing and that'd be the only part I don't quite like, but it's good. I truly believee in Inu/Kag romance and that would be great, let Inuyasha whop some ass with his bro, then you know whatever. but I like it. lol, I'm already thinking my own ending to your story.....lol Sesshomaru gets turned down by Kagome, He gets angry and forces himself on her, rapes her, Inuyasha sadly was too late. Kagome is unconscios, Inuyasha kicks ass, Kagome wakes up, she is now full whatever demon, and almost kills sessomaru, but she turns to normal just befor the final blow, Inuyasha is surprised. blah blah blah...lol than I wake up from my daydream and get back to work..... lol I can't wait......you are really good, god this is long ain't it, well lol sry for wasting your time.
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