| "Heroes Unite" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 13:28 CDT
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NO!! HOW DARE YOU STOP BEFORE THE GOING GET'S...well...GOING?!?! Just kidding, I can't remember if I reviewed for the last chapter or not, but I will anyway. I loved it because Hiei and Kurama grossed out Kuwabara pretty easily. I thought something like that would happen. Anyways, this chapter. It was really good and it's keeping me interested in your story, although I seriously doubt I would ever lose interest in any of your stories. I just have one last thing to say. You better make Kurama be on top that way Hiei can get pregnant and have a little girl, just like they've always wanted. If that doesn't happen soon.... I swear.... I'LL FLASH YOU MY LITTLE BREASTES AND CRY AS LOUD AS I CAN!!!! Great chapter though! ~Number One fan~
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: April 11, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooooo! why did you have to stop it at the good part? *pout*
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 12:09 CST
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Yay! Wonderful update as always! I like this chapter the most. Although it is pretty hard to imagine Hiei having fun and playing with kids. I can't wait till they have another one. It'll make me smile if it's very soon. I anxiously await you next update. From your number-one fan!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 09:16 CST
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Aiya! *fangirl squeel* I'm so glad you updated, and so soon! It's makes me smile the way you write. You always manage to bring the right emotions out of me. I wish you were able to publish this series and become a well known writer. I would buy all of your books and then some! I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh! I almost forgot. Is there a specific reason why Pan and Trunks marks are on their right side and Hiei and Kurama's are on their left?
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 21:19 CST
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OMG! I lurve this story so much!!! I'm so glad you updated! It makes me dance in my pants. I dance I dance I dance... anyways... I wonder, will Hiei have a little baby girl in this story? I think that would be really freakin hot if he did. Don't you agree? I feel bad that I'm the only one reviewing your story. Don't worry, I'll attempt to get some traffic your way. I've got connections and I could probably force *cough cough* er convince so people to read and review this wonderful crossover. Update soon my little fanfic slave minion thingy!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOHOOO!!! I can't wait until your next chapter comes out. I am sooooo liking this fic so far! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 14:20 CST
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Um wow. Can I just say wow? I am actually dying to read your next chapter. This story seems like it will be great just like all your other ones. I'd say it would be, but I don't care for DBZ, but you might change me from my stubborn ways. Great chapter and story, update now if ya know what's good for ya!
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