| "The Moon's Revived Love" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: neospice12
Reviewed By: neospice12 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 16:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have waited for about a year. When are you going to update. I loved It! I really want to know what happened. Please update soon! Shaoran: Maybe I can break the two up. *thinks* Touya&Kero: Oh no you don't you already had a chance with her, and threw it away!!!!! Yue: Where is SAkura? She told me to come here. Shaoran: Hi Yue. Yue: It's you! the one that broke her heart! You shall perish!!!! *shoots ice arrows and daggers at him. Shaoran: Help Me!!!!! Sakural: Yue, plese stop it, besides because of him, we are together. *smiles* Yue: I guess so. Neospice12: Yo! Kero i got some cookies for you! Kero: cookies!!!!! Neospice12: Oh and Touya, i got that bat you wanted. What are you going to use it for? Touya: I'll show you. Oh Gaki!!! After what you did to Sakura, i'm going to hurt you. Shaoran: Help ME!!!!!!!!!! *sigh* Neospice12: I got to break them up again. o well. (Sakura sneaks up to yue and jumps on him.) Sakura: did i scare you? Yue: I sensed your aura, so no (sakura giggles) (Yue and Sakura kiss passionatley) Everyone except for Shaoran:Bye! And you gotta update soon!!!! Shaoran: Save me somebody!!! WHere is Meilin when you need her? Neospice12: Sayonara! ^-^
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Title: comment/review
Reviewed By: Neospice12 On: July 08, 2005 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was beautifu! I don't know wich couple I support anymore. I love the set-up! You are a genius. I loved how you had Sakura and Yue love and confess their love tho each other. I hope Yue doen't die. PLEASE I BEG OF YOU DON'T LET HIM DIE IN THE LATER-ON FIGHT! I love Yue! Shaoron: Hey! I thought you loved me?! ME: I do, but just not in this fanfic, and especially after what you did to Sakura! Sakura: It's ok Neospice12, I have Yue now, and I don't need him any more. (Touya and Kero walk in) Touya & Kero: Ha! Gaki you lose! Touya: i knew sooner or later she would snap out of it! Kero: I'm happy that Sakura will be happy with Yue. Yue: Thank-you Kero Kero: WHy you're welcome, i'm happy that I know you would never hurt your "Mistress" (kero giggles) Yue: WHy you!!!!! (chases Kero around with his arrows.) Kero: Help ME! ME: well i have to save Kero from Yue. He's so hott!!!!! ANd Kero is so Kawaii!!!! (everyone sweatdrops) Sakura: WHile Neospice is trying to save Kero form Yue, I think she wants to say. UPDATE SOON! WE WILL BE WAITING! (Neospice12 yelling) Neospice12: Will you give up already?! Yue: Not unless he apoligizes Kero: Never! (Sakura sweatdrops) Sakura: I guess i'll have to stop this madness. *sigh* Yue! I need your help with something! Yue: Yes Sakura? WHat is it? Sakura: Come here. (kissed Yue on the lips) Shaoron: I lost Sakura! (starts to sob) Me: well that worked. Kero: thank-you Sakura! And Yue I take it back! Yue: good! Keep up the good work! Bye! Sayonara!^ |
Reviewed By: alejandra On: July 31, 2003 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pplleeaassee continue it I'm begging you!!! It was very sweet!!! and i want to know what happens if li get his time alone with sakura and yue gets mad or whats going to happen!!! :'} |
Reviewed By: water On: June 27, 2003 14:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE WRIGHT MORE THIS STORY IS GOOD AND I LOVE THE FACT THAT YUE LOVES SAKURA SO CUTE. BUT REALLY WRIGHT MORE THIS STORY IS JUST GETING GOOD. |
Reviewed By: Wynter On: March 13, 2003 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sence it is a Yue and Sakura fiction i injoyed it^_^ |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 On: July 09, 2002 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked this story.
Post the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: ss On: April 02, 2002 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the s/y i think they cute together love you story |
Reviewed By: anime4eva987 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is good so far! |
