Reviewed By: lovely liz On: March 30, 2006 10:38 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: wow i am first to reviews thats cool. i really like your story. cant wait in till your update the story so i can know what happen next. i realy like the parings too. the way u discribe the stuff makes me feel like i was there to withness what happen betwen the caracters. so i hope u update soon. :) but you need to work on your grammer a little bet, but i still understand whats being said in the story.