Reviewed By:MimoriFanForever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 18:38 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I think it a really good story. Actually i think you should continue it and make it into a entire story with more chapters. I would love to read that, please contine it. If u do i bet it will turn out great :D Hope to see more bi :)