Title: Awesome! Reviewed By: Unknown Fool [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 21:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: HAH! I love your writting style ^_^ If I were to hazard a guess, I'd say my favorite part was when Nadil fell on Gil -^____^- It gave me some lovely GilxNadil images *is a shameless yaoi fangirl* And I liked how for Laamgarnus's stationary you said there were "cat people in . . . UNUSAL positions" XD Brilliance! For a furture chapter (can I give ideas?) can Nadil go to the town where the Dragon Knights first met Cesia, and get romance advice from Delte? (He'd have to be wearing a hilarious get up to keep people from reconizing him, of course) Great chapter, and I hope you update!
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