| "Falls Apart" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: blackonyx83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 09:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it update SOON PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: AHHHHHHHH! OMG
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can you just stop there????? huh? how?? Omg I love this story so much... and I never thought that I would actually like this pairing but I do!! and jeez talk about a cliff hanger at the end omg... I'm scared shitless as it is haha... you are such an amazing writer... really ^^ I'm not just buttering you up... though I do tend to do that a lot.... (maybe I am w/o realizing it) o well anyway I would really really like you to update soon because this story is awsome and I would love to read more.
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Title: hey this is great
Reviewed By: Sarine On: June 11, 2006 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey aren't you going to finish the story i am dieing to know what happens next please write more i need to know wat happens to them and i can't wait to hear wat goes on in the story next
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Reviewed By: boogiecchan On: March 26, 2006 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, your fic is soo great, I'm just speechless.. I actually prefer ShikamaruXTemari but the way you wrote this just made me think SakuraxShikamaru are perfect for each other. I don't know why you thought this cap wasn't good, I found it just PERFECT, the way he kissed her, the way he cares for her.. dammit, it's just TOO perfect, I had to hold my tears T__T I'm REALLY enthusiastic for the next chapter, if you allow me to make a suggestion, please ad a sakuXshika hentai chapter, that'd be SO perfect, I like the way you write the romantic scenes and it made me wonder how perfect it'd be if they finally become one and he washes her suffering away... I'm really looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil NSI On: March 03, 2006 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
This is dark and disturbing...yay!
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Reviewed By: Yoshi12 On: March 02, 2006 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost didn't read this story b/c its shika/sakura and (kinda) Sasuke/sakura and i don't like either of those. BUT i really like this story! stupid sasuke! Sakura and Shikamaru need to kick is ass! I just love Shikamaru! Update soon
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Reviewed By: unspoiledriniakaLuna On: February 22, 2006 02:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic on adultfanfiction.net. It's very well written and is actually one of the few that I've read that has Sakura with someone else and has a good plot. I was really surprised to see it here too of all places. Are you going to update here until aff.net is done moving?
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Reviewed By: romaina On: January 30, 2006 17:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I really really like this fic pleeeeeeeeeeease continue writing!! I must admit that at the begining i found weir that pairing but now i love it! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: naruto360 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update it was fan-fictastic i know what i just wrote was corney but its true
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Reviewed By: katory On: January 29, 2006 07:37 CST
Comment/Review:
update!
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