| "A New Journey And A New Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:17 CST
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this was really good, but i think it could have been better if you had ellaberated more... like made it a little longer... but without that it was pretty good! ;)
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 22:21 CDT
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Awww, she's telling the story to her kiddies.... can't wait to see what the sequel is about!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 22:19 CDT
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AWWWWWW! That's all I gotta say to that!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:49 CDT
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Wait, I thought that she told Kirar aand Shippo to go to Sessho's castle? Im conused, oh well, so far all of my answers have been anaswered so I'll just wait till the next chapter. Hahahahah, she was like I feel funny . . . lol
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:44 CDT
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Awww man, Yukina and their mum died! WAAA! Im so sad rite now. But then again, it was hilarious when she said, aww hes cute when hes not killing large masses of ppl. . . lmao! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER---click
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:39 CDT
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Atleast he ATTEMPTED to keep her safe, she just had to go jumping outta window. I just can't believe that he would leave his sister, but I guess if she has alot of training over the years then it's okay . . .lol. Did she leave SHippo n Kirara?!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:30 CDT
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He just always gotta start a fight don't he. Has Yukina seen Shippo? And how does Yukina know Kagome from 'way back' and have hiei not know. . . . guess i gotta read!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 19:28 CDT
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Oooo, he just gonna watch her from da tree like he knows her!!!!! lol, I LIKED THIS CHAPPIE!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 18:58 CDT
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Awww, how did InuYasha die? Not that I reall care about him, no effense, I never liked him, he's sch an asshole, come to think about it, I never like at least one or two of the main characters of the story . . . lol. Atleast Shippo's with her, I'm assuming Sango and Miroku are just looking for more shards . . . is the dog wit the bitch? lol
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Reviewed By: darkened_soul On: March 17, 2006 21:32 CST
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Wow. that was really good, i liked it.
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Reviewed By: unimportant bystander12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 15:16 CST
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I loved this fic on ff.net and I'm glad you posted it here! Please email me the sequel!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice a littledfast but i like it alot I hope you continue writing your stories.
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