Reviewed By: Goddess of Night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, pretty damn good. Although, you need some work here and there, I think it'd pretty original. Just make it longer, people like LONG chapters. Good jobby, and update soon.
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