Reviewed By: Sapphirefly [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never saw someone use emoticons in their writing before and I'm trying to decide if I think that's cool or not. I'm starting to think that it is, but only because it's from a robot's perspective (I only got as far as the first chapter, cause I've got to go), but I hate it when people read and don't review. You've also got some paragraphs that are clumped together at the beginning, but that might be mediaminer and not you. I thought your idea was WAY up there as far as Escaflowne fics go for originality. And you didn't overcrowd anyone with pointless description. I also liked how you didn't try to incorporate background information into the story, but were just like 'here's a little pop-up about this person'. It was cool. Cheers and keep on writing.
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