| "A Fated Meeting" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 02:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm i dont really no what to think about this one. although it is written nicely and has some good fights i find the main problem with the fact that you skip over some stuff or like you did with their daily cycle it was kinda bland and gave me the feeling that there was something missing. all in all i would call it a good fic but i still think that you should revise some stuff. another thing i think that naruto would not be as annoying as before since he now has a friend but that is just my personal preferance. i cant spell so dont ask but other that those few flaws i found nothing wrong with this perticular fic. but please go over some of the stuff and just add a bit more detail not to the point where your explaining every little thing but it needs some fill ups. ill check in when you up date and or revise your fic. cya l8r
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Reviewed By: SHC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! The chapters are a bit short though. If you're going to make the chapters short then at least update quickly!
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Reviewed By: SHC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! The chapters are a bit short though. If you're going to make the chapters short then at least update quickly!
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Reviewed By: SHC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! The chapters are a bit short though. If you're going to make the chapters short then at least update quickly!
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Title: EEEEE!
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haaah! i absolutely LUUV the Sasuke/Hinata Pairing.... LoL ja ne! update peace out
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