"I'll be there for you" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: LIVEWIRE On: January 25, 2006 16:13 CST Comment/Review: Great one-shot. Though she did forgive him way too easily.
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 00:18 CST Comment/Review: Nice, you had me hooked, though it's sad that it ended so quickly.
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Reviewed By: my little georgia peach On: January 23, 2006 14:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: hey girl wow that was great! totally took away my boardom! I loved it. very well written. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: swirling eyes On: January 23, 2006 00:20 CST Comment/Review: Well, damn you made me cry. Though I can't help but feel Kagome forgave him too easily. I don't know but how about a follow up one-shot where she cheats on him. You know all the unresolved issues that might still linger. I mean come on Kikyo? You know she did that on purpose.
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