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| "Payment in Full: Saiyan's 2nd Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ilex9 (not logged) On: September 17, 2006 00:35 CDT
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This is interesting and certainly has kept my attention, although I'm somewhat confused as I haven't seen Full metal Alchemist. I'm sure as I get further into the story things will reveal themselves and make sense. I'm enjoying yoour characterizations and handling of the characters I do know and definately want to find out where the plot is headed.
| Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 21:14 CDT
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*falls about laughing* I've just posted this review for the wrong story! And you trust me to beta for you!! ^_^ Anyway - here is your review... Well, you know I really like this - but I'm going to say it in public too ^_^ If I was her you know, I think I'd insist on the breeding part... I can think of a lot worse than being Raditz's sex slave... matter of fact, I can't think of many things that would be better ^_^ Bardock's sex slave, obviously... That's the peak of sex slave-dom, but I pretty much fulfil that role anyway *heart eyes* I'll stop ranting and get on with the next chapter now *bats eyelashes* Let's hope I got the right story this time, eh?
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