| "Heart of a Thief" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Archangela [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is amazing. Everything is so clear and concise, makes me jealous! j/k. Keep it up, no matter what, because its a good story and people enjoy it! Can't wait to see what happens down the road with your characters!
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Title: Hmmm. Naraku?
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 02, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright. Your doing pretty well... Better than most are giving you credit for. Well, I'll leave more reviews in future. But you need to update soon. Get us a lemon shortly? Tell us what Shikaeru is up too? And how about your Kuromu kid? I know he's Onigumo. Or is he an incarnation? HMMMMM. Update. Punishment of the Inu/Tryst
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Reviewed By: Magor Assualt Of Time On: March 29, 2006 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update. Your a good author... Your style has some promise. But Onigumo/Naraku isn't very popular. Especially as a hero of a story. There lies your lack of reviews. Ignore this if you call this a flame. But I call it advice.
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Reviewed By: CALYPSO PS2 MAGIC On: March 28, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love is such a fical thing... But your fic promises plenty of Angst.
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Title: Naughty Naraku is my Desert
Reviewed By: Naughty to be Nice On: March 28, 2006 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Any updates after this one? I hope so. Things are getting clearer. What is going to happen next?
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Title: Naughty Naraku is My Desert.
Reviewed By: Naughty to be Nice On: March 22, 2006 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be following closely. So, update soon. Though I am confused on a few points. But, I'm sure that will clear up. As soon as you write another chapter, please post it. :)
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