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Title: blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: blaccwolf123 On: August 20, 2008 00:08 PDT
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That wuz a great chapter. I never thought Jiro would be a dancer and Jakotsu is a real asshole. Update soon.
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Title: lonely_girl (offline)
Reviewed By: lonely_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i've always enjoyed this story. im not trying to nitpick or anything, just lettng you know that you got hinder's 'Lips of an Angel' lyrics wrong 'its really good to hear your voice, say my name it sounds so sweet, coming from the lips of an angel hearing those words it makes me weak, and i never want to say goodbye, but girl you make it hard to be faithful, with the lips of an angel.'
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Reviewed By: zeveran [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think I know who Kikyou is cheating on Yasha with. It has to be either Muso or Onigumo. I'm leaning closer towards the latter because in chapter fifteen, you mentioned the Onigumo was a senior at the campus and also member of the frat. I believe in the last chapter, you had Kikyou tell Kagome about the mystery man and she said that he was both a senior and a frat boy. She also said that she always ran into Naraku while she was with the mystery man and considering that you said the two are related - I think they are brothers, but I'm not too sure - it would make sense if it were Onigumo whom she was cheating with. Heh, I hope I'm right. I love this story, by the way. The suspense is killing me!
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Title: OOOOMMMMMMEEEEEGGGGGAAAAAAAAAWWD
Reviewed By: peachkeen14 On: August 12, 2008 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i must say when kikyo saw yash and kags i was letting out a mental breath and at the same time thinking...oh fuck! this should be ineteresting...how could Jak do that? awful! and i must say this again SESSHOMARU'S AN ABSOLUTE MORON! god he should be stabbed...and hard! and kikyo can't say anything about kag and yash..not like shes so faithful and loyal..what goes around comes around and u just portrayed that perfectly...so well UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: August 11, 2008 17:55 PDT
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ha!! i just realized sess is prolly still sitting outside by himself. ^O^ he missed out on a LOT of sh*t shingling material!!!! take care!
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: August 11, 2008 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, everyone thinks they know whats best for everyone else! i love it. just like real life. XD but, i must say, in jakotsu's favor, if these guys could figure things out for themselves, he wouldn't have gotten punched! lol also, i believe kikyo was just as wrong as yash, only he got caught. but, she had a point about kags being her friend/cousin and doing that to her. *sigh* hopefully things will get resolved. curious to see what happens when all of the sh*t/dust settles! i really can't wait.
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 06:36 PDT
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Oh, and btw.. little typo. The Nazis were WW2, not WW1... Just.. yah.. >_>
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 06:16 PDT
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Bah.. less THAN three.. Stupid typos.
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Title: ONCE AGAIN!!!
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JEEEEEBUSSS!!! Wow.. I should check my email more often. I'm a few days late! D= I know some people might not approve of your actions, young missy, but I must say again that you're writing is like crack for me. I was linking SOG to a friend and they said "what do you mean hasn't been updated in a long time" And I completely FREAKED! I want you to know I told him to fuck off many times so I could read this pixely deliciousness... Soooo, I'm gonna go mop up and you should get back to work!!! But before you go, I think you should know that how long I've been reading your works hit me today O-o.. I was like.. WOW. Bahaha, ok, I'll cut this long thing off with a less that three.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 01:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why can't they just say "screw everything" and run away together? i mean, i don't think any of them have real lasting relationships with their families anyway. look at kagome's family and the way they treat her? oh well, i'm sure you'll figure it out. more soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Darksaintofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter right here has left me totally speechless. I mean Inuyasha was totally screwed over all in one night. lol I mean fun,sex,beat down, and then lastly consequences. Well I must say I do kinda think Inuyasha was alittle too much on Kags in that hentai scene but ya know thats what or well part of who he is but I don't think Kags should except all of him until things were properly delt with meaning since he was still seeing Kikyo. Oh and I have to say I agree with Jakotsu and I felt what he did was right. Even though it wasen't really his business but ya know he was already brought into the mess due to Kagome so he as a dear friend took action. All Kagome and Inuyasha just really need to ge there stuff together.
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Reviewed By: HamsterBattalionCommander [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 08:24 PDT
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*feels smart* I'm really sorry if I spoiled anything. I sometimes tend to say, or in this case write, things before I think about it. Anyway, I was mostly creeped/grossed out by the sex scene in this latest chapter. I would never allow any man to do any of those things to me, but then I'm more of a female-dominant kind of chick. I think the scene was very well written and it really fit in with the situation. I don't think I would have had the balls(wrong gender, but what the hell?) to write what you did, and I really admire that, as a reader and as a fellow writer. I'm precariously perched on the very outermost edge of my seat, waiting for your next chapter.
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Title: As always(:
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 03:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything was wow. That's all I must stay. The ending was just unexpected, but what more do I expect than the unexpected from you? Lol. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Hopefully, I read something again soon. Ahaha. Perfect! Perfect! Perfect!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 20:34 PDT
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Oh my god...so much awesomeness is in this chapter that I don't know where to start. First, as a history officianato I LOVED your bit about Kagejiro's past. Hells yes! I didn't think too many people knew about the Christmas story so good on you for spreading the word :) There was a lot of awesome comedy in this as well. I definitely chuckled at the Budweiser being expendable bit except I think you might've confused Canadian and American beers. It's your side of the border that has the brew made with 90% water ;) Have yourself a Keiths and you've got yourself a solid Canadian beer - premium too! But I digress, I loved this chapter. Hated how you tried to separate them - shame shame shame - but I understand the need for it and I have complete faith that you will make it better, or rather, Inuyasha will make it better. Kagome deserves her self one helluva happy ending after all the shit she's been through. The only light criticism I can offer is that the lemon could use a once over for the sake of correcting some unnecessary word repetition. Not a big deal though since those things are a bitch to write anyway :) Glad to hear that a Sess/Rin reconciliation is in the works for the future. I really like how you handled him in this chapter. Decking Inuyasha was completely called for and completely "Sesshomaru" in that scene and the imagery you had of him sitting on the hood of his car brooding I thought was particularly vivid. Thanks for the update, congrats on your IYFG noms and I look forward to the next one. Happy writing - from a rambling Langus.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 19:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sometimes I REALLY hate Mediaminers review section...
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