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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Tell me one reason why I shouldn't paint this club with your blood." "Red is an awful color for any room," "fathers aren't so keen on finding you in bed with their daughters. There was this one time…" "What can I say; slut must run in that family." To often people forget that Freedom isn't free; the only currency it deals in is blood." "I helped bring tobacco into New Jersey in the first place, but that's another story. The hell they are going to deny me it. I'll incite another Boston Tea Party, see if I don't." -I so want to know more… (this sounds lke an interesting piece of American history….) "A piece of advice boy; there are two kinds of people in life that you can be, you can either sit there with you ass glued ta the chair and take no initiative in life. You better believe though, in twenty years, you'll still be glued ta that chair. Or you can take life by the horns, or the girl by the hips, and enjoy it. What is life worth living if you don't enjoy it? I for one enjoy the feel of a girl grinding up against me, God bless the low standards of dancing today. And that would be my next advice to you; don't fuck every girl you meet unless you are trying to repopulate the Earth. Do me a favor; I'll be here in two hundred years, I don't want ta have ta deal with more than one of ya." "Normally we just break their thumbs, but I supposed full blown murder could be justified in the name of Vodka. It would be a mercy killing though," he added, "poor bastard should be put out of his misery for not knowing the difference." "You're approximately two and a half years too late for that one. You can't abort the living." Miroku winced, freezing in mid grab for a drink from the bartender. "Zing," he chimed, "and there goes the `ouch' button." "Was," InuYasha seethed, "you were married and you cheated on her. But hey, even your God damned wife couldn't stand you, so she found another cock to satisfy her. How does it feel Sesshoumaru; to really fail at everything in life?" "And trust me; I know how to make a man squeal like a pig."
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 18:09 PDT
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YAYY A NEW CHAPTER!!! I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THE SHOCKING ENDING!! AND THE LAST PART WAS REAL SUBTLE AND HAD ME LAUGHING! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!
| Reviewed By: tamara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, well I'm just glad I'm not the only one over here thinking about orgies! xD Haha but OMG, I thought they were actually going to end it just like that... I felt the tears coming! I'm glad Kikyo finally found out - better to just get it over with quick. Now that she knows I just hope they can FINALLY stop caring what she thinks... I know, wishful thinking, lol. I'm still surprised about Jakotsu... he so fucked Kagome over! I could see him intervening to try & keep Kagome from getting hurt, but I don't see how what he did HELPED her at all. Jeeeez! I can't decide whether or not to like Kikyo... one minute she seems nice and the next she comes off as a grade-A bitch. I'll say I hate her for now just cause she's getting in the way of more lemons like the one in this chapter. :( Lol... Anyways, great update - thank you for writing awesome stories to keep me preoccupied! (:
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 15:46 PDT
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i was practically fucked XD I had to read the last three chapters since i found out i never read them O.o But i dont care - i had laughs n all that shit! It was amazing... i dont kno where to start cuz am no amma jus ramble like an idiot. but Jiro is so damn hot!! *drools* no no, he puts a new meaning to hot *sighs* honestly, and the accent was so delicious OMG!! more thant delicious - dang... i think u jus made me infatuated with him.. like i give a hell... i'd strip naked for him lmao. Sesshomaru - lawd, i feel for him but at the same time i wanna hit him... first off, i think its so cute how jiro can handle him... he's like the version of inuyasha when hes the one "controlling" inuyasha... he's like a pup! - a hot pup! lol... though how he called his son a mud blood >.> I hated him for that... i mean, he got his head so far up his ass to be calling his SON that?? And i kno inuyasha feel it/ understands it more since he's the same as his nephew - which i wished that you'd let Inuyasha punch his lights out!! >:{ I'm eager to see how sesshie story will turn out.. and rin is going through a hard time as it is, n the kid needs a father figure too! Then... there's the comedian aka Miroku.. god i love him! lol he can take any tough situation and make a joke out of it! The comedy in this is awesome, something that i will forever love! I'm starting to feel even more sorry for kags too.. and kikyo jus had to catch them when they decided to ends thing huh?? stupid jak.. i hope that hit that kags gave him broke some part of his pansy body - i mean i kno he meant well, but in some cases its not needed... sob sob... its so sad... n they're lil moment behind the bar was so cute... JIRO IS SO HOT!! OOT OOT!! ((random)) lmao .... i love this fic, i love jiro, i love u for writing this fic and i love jiro!! ^_^ until next time... take care and JA!! =)
| Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was such a good chapter!!! I can't believe that Kikyo finally found out! And *yay* that was REALLY good!!!!!!!! :)
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 13:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! "One of these days I'm gonna' ram a parking cone up his ass!" That was from InuYasha Parody! Lol...it would've been funnier if Yash said it though..but he was rightly pissed at the moment. As for Jakotsu..what the hell? He does everything in his power to keep Kaggie away from Yash but waits for his hell-spawned cousin to almost KILL her before taking action? That's not right! Kags and Yash should've punched him for that. Despite everything though...I kind of feel bad for Kikyou having to catch them like that. You've actually made her character...Dare I say it? Likeable. Lol...ANYWAY, loved the chapter! Till your next update! ~Amber
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 12:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap ola with fries on the side! I'm laughing my ass off at Kage, then I'm fanning myself because, dear Jesus!, Inuyasha has a mouth on him. :shutters: Then, in the middle of crying my eyes out because they've given up, I just about have a heart attack. I never saw Kikyo coming! If I were Kagome, I'd knock the crap out of Jac, too! He and Sango need to join the meddlers anomoyous together. And Sesshoumaru, I really wish Inuyasha would have punched him. Maybe Kage will when he goes outside...Anyway! Thankyou so much for the update. I will wait with baited breath for the next update. THANKYOU! Ja ne.
| Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 12:28 PDT
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Ah, a long-awaited revelation. The fallout from this will reverberate for chapters to come. I'm glad Inuyasha realizes what he's doing to Kagome, but that's something he needs to sort out on his own, not fuck her around switching back and forth between Inuyasha and Sha - pun certainly intended. I can't recall, does Jakotsu know the truth behind Inuyasha and Sha?
| Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 12:07 PDT
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o my gosh. and yet even more shit goes down. amazing chapter hun, keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG - you updated! *hyperventilates* -- ok ok... am going to read now n then give u a killer review xD
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 13:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC AND I LOVE U 4 WRITING IT AND BEING SO GOOD.... WOW I LOVE IT (I KNO U'VR HEARD THIS LIKE 109099430949557 TIMES B4 BUT...)UPDATE SOON!!!!
| Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 13:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC AND I LOVE U 4 WRITING IT AND BEING SO GOOD.... WOW I LOVE IT (I KNO U'VR HEARD THIS LIKE 109099430949557 TIMES B4 BUT...)UPDATE SOON!!!!
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 03:35 PDT
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| Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: July 01, 2008 02:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey dont feel bad.I'm glad your still writing this story, you've been writing it for 2 years that is really amazing.You have a life to live.Taking time out of your day to write a story for strangers is really cool.Thats why you remain my favorite author.Your stories are the main reason I still read fanfics.Great chapter and Sessh is an asshole, LOL calling his own kid a mudblood. unbelievable. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123-
| Reviewed By: peachzykeen On: June 24, 2008 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah ur back from the dead! well i guess i can't really complain about the long bouts between updates I'm not really that current with my own..hehe...anyways tho OMG HOW COULD SESSHY SAY THAT?!...yet again not like i didn't see it comming...sesshy needs to find rin and make up....and how could Kagome not see what is so painfully right in her face? and that goes for Kikyo as well...her more even...anyways amazing story update soon i can't wait and please...give kikyo a few iq points..this is just painful.
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