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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 11:04 PDT
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I know I've said this before but I really do love Kagejiro. But as I have mentioned smartass is my achilles heel. (Although I don't think I could handle...maybe in doses...) I must say even with all the serious issues/points in this chapter 'Jiro makes the stuff we have all known for chapters seem hilarious. I'm still trying to decide which is funnier, the beginning of the chapter or the end. (I think I'm leaning to toward the latter but it's still a big tie.) And I didn't foresee Kagome's attack. Guess they look more alike than I thought. I figured he looked similar to Sess and Yash but still different enough to realise they were not the same (like InuYasha and Sesshomaru are). Either I'm wrong in my assumption or I have to dock Kagome points for not remembering a guy she had mind blowing sex with. Which is it?
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: June 24, 2008 09:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, kagejiro is so awesome... and scary. i luv his dark humor and his adoration of all things alcoholic!! lol so great. and damn, if kagome finds out everything.. O.o well, i'll just say i bet it'll be quite an explosion. congrats on your nominations. i hope you win, and i look forward to the next chap. good luck with finding a place to settle. take care and thanks for writing when you can. *hugs*
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Title: home home in the rain, where the beer makes the mariners ok (lol back to seattle for me)
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Understandably life happens, not to mention that a good story takes time. If anyone's complainging at your (other then yourself) then send this new hunky sounding bad ass to what was it "knock in their skulls". He's quiet an interesting fellow.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 22:42 PDT
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"Kahmayha-mayha wave" = soooo frickin funny! great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 17:28 PDT
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:shakes head: Your poor dog boys are really clueless. I think if poor Sess had looked up "bad things to say to your baby mama" he couldn't have found worse things to say to Rin. Similarly, Inu just really needs to come clean to Kagome. His double and triple lies are going to catch him like that train wreck that was discussed earlier. Finally, I really like 'Jiro. I like him a lot. He completely cracks me up. Thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: June 23, 2008 15:21 PDT
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"Dog demon is a popular breed. Want to know why?" That pretty much sums up why I love your story.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 11:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was great fun and a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for updating :) I think the scene between Rin and Sesshomaru was my personal favourite. The way his demeanor shifted so radically in such a short amount of time was interesting because you wrote it very real. I'd love to see a reconciliation between them somewhere down the road or even just a meeting between Sesshomaru and Kenren. Hopefully life becomes a little less hectic for you once you're all settled in. All the best (and congrats on the award wins!)
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
is she just that stupid? i mean, c'mon! it's sooooooo obvious!!!! and kagome. and what's gonna happen with sess? and rin and their son? ooh. more soon please. pretty please.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
is she just that stupid? i mean, c'mon! it's sooooooo obvious!!!! and kagome. and what's gonna happen with sess? and rin and their son? ooh. more soon please. pretty please.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 07:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha..."this sesshomaru never got acne". That line had me rolling on my floor like a psychopath. And Miroku just doesn't stop with the cool one liners ("That's Mr.Lucifer..."), lol. Though Sesshomaru's reaction to Rin's news kind of sucked (what a dick!) the update was awesome. I must say I especially love Jak...under all that glamour he's a clever little genius. One question though: will that guy from Japan (Sota's father) come into the picture any time soon? Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:happy dance: A new chapter! Woot! Okay, first of all, Sesshoumaru is stupid and poor Rin is going to do something equally stupid. Inuyasha needs to just come clean before he gets pounded on by Kagome. Kagome really does need to open her eyes and Kikyo needs to be slapped silly. Jiro is worse than Inuyasha ever thought about being. The scene with him and Jak is some funny stuff. I knew it was going to boil over! It leaves me to wonder how much longer you will torment all our lovable friends before you let the cat out of the bag completely. Inuyasha and Kagome are in for some hell when everything comes to light. Kikyo is going to s8@t a brick. And I know you said something about Kagome's dad coming back. That should be wonderful (note the scarsasm). Well, thank you so much for the new chapter. It was well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 01:33 PDT
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too many good lines this is just one I picked up "For a college town, this place blows. Where are the college sluts willing to bare all?" GREAT chapter!!!
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Title: Ehhh
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It doesn't matter to me how long it takes for you to update as long as it's updated right? :] I enjoyed the chapter and I love the story so much that I review on the two sites I found it on, ff.net and mm.org[: Now, I'm off to review on my say0mi saki account. Lol.
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Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 22:54 PDT
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Have I ever told you you write some fucking hilarious dialogue? "Dear Diary, jackpot. Giggity-giggity." Lmao at Miroku and Kagejiro. And I love all the tension, everyone piecing together the clues as Kagome and Kagejiro do. You have to have Jiro stick around for a bit, because he's a riot, I love him. Peace.
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Reviewed By: Feudal Association On: June 19, 2008 02:26 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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