| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG When inuyasha and Mirkou were on the train "I feel gay" lol that was funny. But really Bankotusu needs to stop I hope he dies that would be fun. And inuyasha and kagome's relationship is out in the open so they can live happily. ^^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed67 On: December 13, 2007 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you don't update soon, i might just kill myself. i've spent the last five hours just reading this fanfic. i'm not joking when i say that i'm completely in love with "shades of gray". the development of the characters and their relationships is astounding. i can't wait to seem what goes on with the inuyasha-kagome-kikyo triangle. and your plot is captivating. thank you so much for taking the time to write this story
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: December 13, 2007 14:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I am sad that you had finished this chapter so soon. I am wondering will Sess and his big brother going to fight over Rin once they know about her and the baby. Please update soooon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 13, 2007 09:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just made my day sweetie! :) Loved it...though it was a bit on the short side coming from you. I guess I'm spoiled when it comes to your story. But it was nicely done may I add. I can't wait to see how the showdown is gonna happen.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 01:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for the action. and for kikyo and inuyasha to break up! more soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it was short, it was wonderful. So Kagome's gonna show up as a 'normal girl'. That should make spotting her all that much easier. I seriously doubt you would let her not see Bank' though. I love your twisted mind. It makes me happy that I'm not the only one who thinks that way. I don't write too much angst, but I sure do love it to peices! Keep um comming!
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Title: Absolution
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 19:32 PST
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Ah, the joys of being the only one to have figured it out...I cannot wait, Kagejiro being mistaken for Kenren's daddy, and the Kik/Inu break up...and all the while the fuse on the powder keg of the whole "Koizumo/Higurashi/Taisho" business world set-up grows ever shorter...it'll be interesting to see who and how the three families survive the blow-out when their reputations are shattered overnight. Awesome chapter, congrats on winning the IYFG award, despite what I've been told is happening now. I heard I was nommed too, but no winning notification. Eh, so it goes. Awesome chapter and I eagerly await the next one.
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Title: Part Deux
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 19:15 PST
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Tres fantastique! You've set this all up quite nicely for the scenes to follow. I can't wait to read them :) I like that this has sort of gone full circle - it's going to climax at the club, right where it all started. I appreciated your shout out to Canada too...even though it was sort of in a timbuktoo-esque reference. Poor Canada always getting dissed on hahaha Well I look forward to the next chapter. Happy holidays and happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 18:49 PST
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Haven't read the chapter yet...just wanted to say YAY!!! I was seriously just sitting at my computer surfing the net and thought "I wonder when she's gonna update Shades of Gray?" then BOOM! Email in my inbox. It's like you were reading my mind :) Fantastic...okay now off to read. I'm sure I'll have many good things to say.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 12:44 PST
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Oi, took me long enough to finally read these last two chapters. And they are awesome chapters! I'm glad that we finally know the secret about Kagome's family. Please update soon!
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: November 28, 2007 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, your a mastermind.Jiro is already my favorite character.I love the way he talks, u really are amazing.He is exactly how I thought he would be.A older and crazier Inuyasha.And souta is Kagomes kid?I did not expect that at all.Big suprise that was.Keep up the good work. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Blaccwolf123 On: November 28, 2007 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, your a mastermind.Jiro is already my favorite character.I love the way he talks, u really are amazing.He is exactly how I thought he would be.A older and crazier Inuyasha.And souta is Kagomes kid?I did not expect that at all.Big suprise that was.Keep up the good work. your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123
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Title: inu_miko
Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 19:27 PST
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omg you have to update, im on the edge of my seat waiting for what happens next. love it by the way. please please update soon for me >inu_miko
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaiiiii-yaaaa! Took you long enough! I thought maybe you had slipped into a coma or something! Anyways, chapter 25 was AMAZING... as always.. and 26 I will most assurely read tomorrow! Thank you for updating ^_^
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: November 13, 2007 14:12 PST
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Is is bad that I love Jiro? He fits right in. And wow, why does Kikyo have to get complicated right now? Oh well, great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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