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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 › » ] | Title: chappie 22
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 22:01 PDT
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awesome as always. Lemon (which I'll reread once I'm not falling asleep later :P), plot, set-up, secrets revealed...who is/was Kikyo screwing if not Naraku...hm... Oh, the IYFG is voting now. Also, if you have time, check out my new story "The Seventh Key", it's gonna be awesome! And finally, if I may, another quote to donate for your usage. "Hypothetically, if the only choice you have is to do the wrong thing, then it's not really the wrong thing. It's more like Fate. You have to do what you have to do" - Vladimir Lem (the "Max Payne 2" video game). Peace out!
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 21:18 PDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the April 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2007awards/Best-Angst-Ficti on-2nd.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_April2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our sixth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: girl_x_16(nsi) On: May 07, 2007 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome met someone while in Japan? 0.0! poor Kagome if she doesn't tell Kikyo the truth she'll probably get the shit kicked out of her again! Bank possibly coming down to jersey to get Kagome? Damn... bad things just seem to pile up on her... poor Inu, people always getting on his case when he doesn't need it the most. All in all it was a very good chapter! Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: May 07, 2007 11:21 PDT
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Good chapter. I just don't know if I like Kikyo being involved in Kagome's problems...I'm more inclined to believe that her previous indifference was voluntary and not because she's a misunderstood person whose just ignorant. Oh well, good luck with the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 06, 2007 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The cunning evil guys are the best. lol. And I so know what you mean about Bank being kinda like Anthony Hopkins and stuff. The norm evil guys are bland, you're right. It's like you'd never have thought of their way thinking but when you figure out what it is, it's creepy as Hell. heh. I can't wait for the next chapter. I was a little surprised at Kikyo in this chapter. She seemed genuinely concerned. I didn't know she cared for Kagome. And Bankotsu, uh, what can I say about him? Hm, I'm still trying to figure out whether or not he was sincere about still caring for Kagome because he missed and truly loves her, or if he's simply a sadistic evil bastard who wants to hurt her more. heh. Update soon! ;-)
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 *NSI* On: May 02, 2007 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wanna know something freaky? I totally had a dream about this chapter the other night. It was crazy. Bank came up to the school and... Let's just say it was reaaaaally interesting. Your story must be hella good if I'm having dreams about it huh? *lol* I can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 04:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, i am so in love with your fics now! Count me in as a fan for life ^_~ I jus love this fic and i choose to read this first since my exams are in 2weeks -_- *groans* Anyway...off of that! Inuyasha!!!!! *squee* Goth inu?? *drools* My my my! I can so picture EVERYTHING! It's so amazing! I love how both inu and kags had hated each other in reality but in the club and world of goth, they jus lusted eachother completely. I did that shakespare in my second year of highschool one time, it was my fav along with Macbeth...anyway, i love how u did your own twist on things... kaggie got a lil of bankutso eh...tho he's a complete fucked up sadist!!! I wont even start on how stupid kags could get, but first love or love itselfs does crazy stuff to ppl, ne? I remember when u introduced rin and her baby that u said sesshy isnt the father and it turned my mind off of him and started to wonder jus who the dad was...but then, i guess that was only to turn us readers huh? I was loving all the comedy and drama! Ii'm a fan of dark fics and ofcourse hentai too O.~ lol... When u sesshy came in and rin found out all about Bankutso i was jumping in glee!! I mean she figured out everything jus cuz she had a lil thing with the almighty Sesshomaru!!! But now am jus rambling on arent i? And i have to go get ready for school right about now actually >.> I gotta go face that entrepreneurial teacher we have...i so hate that subject!! Well, dear sexy bankutsu (dont tell inu or sesshy!! lol) I hope u burn he hell u fucking sadist!! and kagome? Go fuck INUYASHA!!! IN-U-YA-SHA!! ya...SHA from inuyasha...i figured it out the first time and knew it jus had to b our fav sex god! Well, update when u can and i hope u do well in your finals! ^_^---Love me...i wrote a long review here...lol
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 00:44 PDT
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THAT WAS FANTASTIC! yay for a new chapter!!! i like how the friendship between rin and kags is getting stronger. i really, really wanted to kill bank in this chapter. nasty boy, lol. i really wanna hear more about how miroku convinced sango to let him stay at her place. heehee. great chapter, as always! can't wait to read more!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 23:33 PDT
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meow! Is Kikyou gonna get the full story or what?! And Sango dropped Bank's name and Inuyasha still didnt catch on. Damn it!!! *growls* hmmm.... I can't wait for the next chapter, its getting ready to explode i can feel it. Ya know, i've been on the road since 7am, and its now 2:30 am.... damn im wiped out. Emotionally and physically. Oh and you put Jakotsu in harms way? Will Bank really come and get Kagome? Will rin call sesshomaru? Will Kagome finally meet Kenren?! ack.. too tired to ask more questions keep up the good work and congrats on college. :) ~~Autumn
| Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: April 30, 2007 11:40 PDT
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yash is gonna eventually have to make some decisions cuz everything that sango and miro are saying is true. but, it just seems that everyone is in too deep to just walk away. man, seppuku is sounding better and better. but, then the fic would be over. :( i guess the thing that has to happen in these cases is that sh*t just gets so deep and outta hand that everything explodes. then everyone finds sh*t out in the worst possible ways. XD at least, that's been my experience with keeping important stuff from people. although, this scenario has me beat. lmao can't wait for more and good luck this week with exams. banzai!
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 09:27 PDT
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Great chapter! I'm glad that Kagome finally stood up for herself and told Bankostu off. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: peavine85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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The names you have given to your last two chapters are great. It might seem silly to be commenting on them, but the chapter titles are sometimes half the fun (if they are good ones).
| Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! yay I love this fiction so much but you already know that! when is Inu gonna find out about kagome? On another note the I've had lost of homework to so the pic is almost done!! Go you! ~Sadie~
| Title: Chappie 21
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:51 PDT
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Yeah Kags, it sucks how, on seemingly scheduled intervals, something horrible happens, like some sort of higher power it putting you through hell :P. --- Good chapter again, as a note, a few letters in the start of the chapter are red for some reason, but meh. Also, forgive me for being a hentai, but I read Sangos line "I can see it on her face", and I just laughed and blushed...I am sorry, heh heh. I have been hanging around you and Grrrl for too long. --- Also, way to have Kagome tell that dipshit to shove it! She needs to get a few goods shots on him before this story ends. Or at elast a kick in the balls :P.
| Reviewed By: inukag_obsession(nsi) On: April 29, 2007 19:51 PDT
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Ahh, I had forgotten about that... But wow.. Kag standing up to Bank like that... bravee... What now? :S What happens when he gets mad at her and goes after her family... would he? Aah, can't wait for the next!!
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