| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: March 23, 2007 00:44 PDT
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Oh yeah, LOVED Inuyasha's ring tone. lol.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: March 23, 2007 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, for a minute I thought it would be Bankotsu waiting at InuYasha's apartment. *shudders* That would have been scary. Like he found out Yash's true identity and was there to beat the shit out of him or something. I wouldn't put it past him. lol. I thought this chapter fit it's title to the tee. Great chapter. And I loved the chapter before this one, too. I gotta say, that was some hot non-verbal interaction. lol. Awesome writing, girl! ;-) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* its 1:20 am and i've finally finished the newest chapter, i swear i read faster then this. lol.. im gonna send you an email when im not so freakin tired. I just had to leave a review to let you know that i think this chapter is great and i look forward to your next update.. more in the email.
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 18:18 PDT
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ooooohh.... Sesshy!! That's your toy?? hahaha. Loved the chap, can't wait for the next!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: March 22, 2007 16:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You freakin' rock! I loved this chapter...though the cliff hangers are killing me! Please update soon and keep up the amazing writing. I can't wait for everything to be revealed as far as Kagome and Inu finding out who each other 'really' are, Sess finding out he has a child...and what Bank is up to......
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Reviewed By: Caitriona Too lazy to sign in On: March 22, 2007 10:25 PDT
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Excellent chapter. While the single storyline of Kik/Inu/Sha/Kag/Tat/Ober is a good one that has be biting my nails at moments, I do like that you have fleshed out Rin's story. Not only do I wonder what is going on with Sess and Rin and wondering why she either hid the child or lost Sess, but it also fleshes out the story and makes it all more interesting. I also like the budding realtionship between Mir and Sango in this piece. I would like to have a little more backstory on Miroku, but you have chocked a lot in so far and may not have had time. Question: I don't remember, has Inu see/noticed the scars on Kagome's back? Has Kikyou? And just what has Kikyou been doing all this time? (probably having a clandestine affair with Naraku :) ) Thanks for updating. I look forward to the next chapter. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 07:02 PDT
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Great chapter! I knew that Rin's son was Sesshomaru's. Man, and what is Sesshomaru doing at Inuyasha's? Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey good chapter as usual, I have a bad feeling of why fluffy's there............? lol anyways I'm almost done wit the picture been crazy round here you should have it promptly! ^_^ ~Sadie~
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Title: Chappie 18
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 21:48 PDT
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"What was there to talk about? How about the fact he came on your face five hours ago?" Yeah, that's always a good conversation starter :P Ya know, it was just around the Jade Emperor story that I realized Sessy hadn't been around, then it crossed my mind what you were building two with the Inu-youkai/Kenran thing, and I was gonna mention it here...seems kinda redundant now, so... Well, great chapter as always. I liked the Catherine thing, that like, Rin's full name? I like that, that's new. PS: I'm not sure entirely sure if you've seen the(Ugh, I hate doing this), but I posted a pair of B-day one shots for Da Grrrl. If you have time, check them out ;). See ya around!
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 09:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh, steamy... an unexpected turn for sure... but freakin' awesome!!! That would suck if all of a sudden Kikyo stops by Inu's place and finds out kags is there! I feel bad for Sango, but she did bring it upon herself, plus she was kind of pissing me off too and I wasn't even there...oh well, Great chap. and can't wait to see what comes next, please update soon!
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Title: chpt 17 reveiw
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 11:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i spent roughly the last 12 hours or so, reading this story. OH MY GOD. Its wonderful. Its spectacular. Its a story that must be updated as soon as you can. All I ask, is that its not nearly as long as COTD. (that was a massively long story). I can't wait for Inu to find out about Kags BDSM. I cant wait for kags to figure out that inu is sha. Will Inu see the scars on kags back before he finds out if she is into bdsm? Will kagome casually let slip Bank's nickname as a name for everyone who keeps asking. That would really be a twister. Because only Inuyasha would get the reference. ohhh i see so much potential for the story, i can't wait to see what you come up with. And i love how you portrayed Jak's character. It would be an even bigger shocker if Bank killed Jak, for letting kags go. or something to that effect. Im rambling now, and i need sleep desperately. please dont let this story die out, its too incredible and i would seriously feel the loss if you left it with all the lose ends. Heh, if you ever needed suggestions in keeping the story going, i have a ton of them. Sincerely Autumn the reviewer
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 04:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*busts out laughing.. * I havent even finish chapter 3 yet, and already i have to comment. I've been to Bloomsburg PA.. I've even been to Bloomsburg University. I just find it hillarious that you mentioned it in this story. and so far, im loving every little bit. Keep it up, i cant wait to finish reading it. :) Autumn the reviewer
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 10:11 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU!!!! I LOVE THE STORY!!!!it's so good!!!!!! more chapters and ya better be quick about it!!!^.^i think this is easily one of the best stores i've read
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 09:59 PST
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Is it hot in here or is it just me? *fans self* yowza that was one steamy chapter! IT WAS GREAT!!!! ... i think my brains is fried, haha. can't wait for an update! (where does one find a guy like that??? LMAO)
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 06:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you, have I told you that lately? lol yea akward :P Anyways short but sweet, keep up the great work, love this story! Your an awsome writer, and the plots are great! ^_^ Ja Ne ~Sadie~
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