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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure know how to keep some one hanging on. I love what Kikyo told her parents “As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!” Fantastic line. And Yura's line “When a gorgeous guy parks a million dollar car in the parking lot of this scummy place, you take notice to the comings and goings. Trust me; you’d know if they were back.” the whole thing with Yura was Awesome, very funny, right where you needed it. |
Reviewed By: New Fan On: December 23, 2010 15:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very deep chapter I just read. I can not wait to see/read what Inu's brothers involvment will be like when they saving Kagome. Will daddy dearest know what has happen? If he does, will he get involve? Update really soon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. Is Inuyasha's theory about Onigumo and Bankotsu right? Doesn't sound so bad to me. Clearly, it's soap opera-ish, but who doesn't like that stuff when it's so well written? Anyway, Kagejiro is still amazing. He says what everyone thinks out loud and makes every other character look moronic in comparison to him, lol. I also loved the first part with Kikyo and Kagome's family. Nice insight. And now that everybody is up to date, I can't wait for this major ass kicking we're talking about! It sure is sad to hear about this story coming to an end, but it's only normal and thank goodness you never gave up! So excited. :) Thanks for the update, you amazing you, haha. |
Reviewed By: shina (-shina-@live.com) On: December 23, 2010 05:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens with Bank! Poor Inu! I like the way you brought it all out to Kikyou and Jiro. Jiro's reaction was amazing...retelling it all like a soap opera! lol. Great update! |
Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2010 07:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love love. kikyo pulling through was a bit of a shocker...i liked it. taisho boys to the rescue! in suspense until the next update. keep up the good work dearie! |
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling (nsi) On: December 21, 2010 13:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
“As for shameful indiscretions, I lost my virginity on the back of a school bus in seventh grade to a high school dropout. Sit on that and rotate!”...That was the best! I really loved the change Kikyou made here. Kagome's Mom was pretty awesome, too, and this was all REALLY exciting. I'm on the edge of my seat here wanting to know what'll happen. As always, it was such a nice surprise to see an update for this and I can't wait to see if they'll find Kagome...and if there's anything left of her, though Sesshomaru's idea of how Bankotsu might act makes me hopeful. I wonder what was in the package Kagome left Sango, too. Exciting update! And I hope you have a Happy Holiday!:D ~Amber |
Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2010 11:23 PST
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Chapter was a bit dry aside from Kikyo coming back from the Dark Side ;p. But then, it's an arc chapter, those tend to be such, I know. Eagerly awaiting the next update. :) |
Title: SAAAANNNNTTTTAAAA!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 09:54 PDT
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Okay....*sighs*....I've been guilty of reading w/o reviewing. Anyways, I love this story it is by faaarrrr the best story in my favorites. Every time I get an email that said you updated, I feel like a little giddy kid opening a Christmas gift every time I see the latest update. I'm glad Inu and Kags made up and she confessed about her past. In the beginning, I was starting to think every thing was slowly starting to turn upwards, but then....fucking Bank...came outta left field and rocked Kags world, man! I was like, "No! Run,girl!" WHO THE FUCK DOES HE THINK HE IS? They're like the mafia or something. I can't wait to see this unfold and how Bank get's taken down. Miro and Kagejiro are HILARIOUS. Oh,I forgot what happened between Sessh and Rin, I'm going to have to read through and find out. Anyways, I love the story even though the updates are few....they're full and satisfying. It's like three good updates in one. Thanks for posting this story and it's been a privilege getting a chance to read it!
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Reviewed By: misato_1471 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I do hope Inuyasha saves Kagome. I really do! eeeee! I know you're busy with reality but do update when you get a chance. Looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2010 00:37 PDT
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omg! that's really all i can say... i knew he was going to try to get her back but jeez!!! i don't know what's gonna happen or how inuyasha will find her! how will he find her?! she can't die!!!! more soon please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 19:42 PDT
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:O Very intense chapter! So much good and so much bad. Dammit. Smells like massive ass kicking as an ending. I wonder how Kagome is going to be saved, 'cause you'll make Inuyasha or anyone save her, right?! Violence is welcomed as long as Bankotsu literally rots in hell in the end. Kagome's luck with men is just that incredible.
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Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: ImmoralT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTT! This girl cannot get a break!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!!! Totally hooked and CANNOT WAIT to see how Bank's attempt at murder pans out.! OH and I'm really looking forward to Jiro finally being able to fight...Bank? **crosses fingers** I mean, i know you love him but Irishmen just do it better :) XP On a more personal note, I wish you all the best in your life and I do hope that everything sorts itsself out in your benifit. :D
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Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 17:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOORAY YOU UPDATED! Actually, you updated while I was in the hospital in labor lol! I now have a beautiful baby girl who is napping right now. Sorry it took me awhile to finish this chapter, I've been having to read in bits and pieces but it was excellent. So glad that they've made up and are finally being totally honest with each other about their pasts. Also, I've got to say it's very Bankotsu that he's already come for Kagome. Inuyasha is going to feel like an idiot, I can already see the berating he'll give himself. I hope Kagome can maybe do something to help herself using her miko powers, I feel sort of proud that she fought back so hard too. I'm sorry to hear your life has been hectic in a non-awesome way, I hope it's better now. I also understand how much it can bother the author to have a story that's unfinished. We know you'll finish it, we're just impatient to read your amazing lines is all!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2010 21:16 PDT
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:D Great update, love that you make me nervous with your cliff..... I hope your not having to much troubles in your personal world. :) Hope all is well. Thank you for the update. :)
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: July 14, 2010 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I did not realize its been over four years, but I have to say that everytime you updated, the story gets better and better. I just wondering will we read some more of Rin and Sess. Will Sess be in the fray with Inuyasha and Kagome, since his family secret has been compromised?! It will be great if the brothers come together to defeat Banks and Oni. Update really soon. P.S. whatever you are going through personally, I am sorry and I hope that it will be resolve soon.
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