| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 23:56 PST
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so his brother was wrong! ha!! well, i never saw a weirdo stalker coming. i really thought it was naraku that kikyo had been doing. please have more soon! i want to see what happens and if naraku can talk some sense into his cousin!
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Reviewed By: GLily On: March 01, 2010 21:26 PST
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For the chapter you just gave us, consider yourself forgiven. ^_^ Please update soon though!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so I was really excited when I saw it was Onigumo! I can't believe I got it right! Anyway, thank you for coming back to this story, I was worried! Geeze, since your last update I got myself knocked up, by my husband, and I'm due with a baby girl in July! (I have to announce that to everyone, apparently) So, this was excellent, the confrontation with the photos exactly how I'd imagined it! I'm really looking forward to her making up with Sango and Rin and even Miroku too lol. I see possible massive humor in the making. I just hope you're able to update more frequently, although I understand real life has a way of taking over your priorities for you. So, excellent as always and update soon!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 17:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sooooooooo happy when I got the email for this! I loved it! The way they made up was so explosive and crazy--a little unexpected considering their argument--but amazing all the same. Interesting twist with the cousin. I had a feeling he was gonna be one of the reincarnations, but his motives are a bit of a blur. I can't wait to read more about those. Naraku surprised me as the good guy here and his arguments and him reluctantly working with IY made me giggle. The banter was hilarious. And of course, I can't wait to read more on IY/Kag making up. Even if she makes things right with him, I can't see everyone else so readily accepting her (especially Sango and Rin). How Mama's gonna react to Kagome bringing a boy home should be interesting, too. I wonder if she'll wind up having to sneak him through a window xD VERY exciting update! Well worth the wait! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 12:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've been waiting for them to reunite for so long! And I didn't think they'd jump each other right away! I dreamed of it, but I didn't expect you to write it, lol. Amazing update, really. It's fine, you were busy. Everyone happens to be busy sometimes. I'm kinda missing Sesshomaru and Kikyo (sigh)... Please, update soon!
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Title: I FREAK THE FUCK OUT!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 10:07 PST
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Yes! YES! YEEEESSS! I love it...every aspect of it. The suspense...the intensity...and of course, the LEMON! So, Naraku is...the...good guy? That'll be hard to wrap my mind around, but okay. When Naraku said that it wasn't him in the pics, I was like, "Mmmhmmm, yeah whatever, bro." But okay, enter Onigumo the crazy cousin stalker who knows about....basically everything. Great job Kags for snatching the fishnet clad hanyou pic. Then hot lemon in the car...can't resist those "cognac" eyes. Okay, let me stop rejoicing. I love this story and because you don't update often, when I get the email about it...I FREAK THE FUCK OUT. I'm like, Elf. "SANTA!" NEways, wishing you luck, prosperity, and all that jazz (^_^)!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 10:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. Glad to see she's giving him another chance.
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 08:28 PST
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So glad you updated!!! Thank you so much. Love the lemon. I`m totally like Kagome : I melt when Sha comes out @-@ So hot!! I`m so glad that she`s over the IY/Bankotsu conspiracy. I really wanted to hit her a few chaps back. Now after reading this chap, I have a craving for a glass of cognac. lol
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Reviewed By: kathleen collin On: March 01, 2010 01:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i started reading this when it first came out i have enjoyed what has been written so far so when a new chapter is up i enjoyed it to bad they are not frequent but none the less im glad for the new chapter and when are you possibly gone to wrap this story up
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Reviewed By: Scriptix -nsi- On: March 01, 2010 00:44 PST
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Squee! I refreshed my inbox and saw this and was like *blink blink zomg* Damn, what a ride! In all sense of the word. I completely loved it - and that was totally hot. I love that he fucked his truck up. =] Also very glad that their relationship is moving on. I remember wanting to smack Kagome around a little bit through the last few chapters. Stubborn, thickheaded...
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 00:42 PST
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omg omg i was about to head to sleep, and it said email alert.. at first i was like what is shades of gray? sounds familiar.. cant put my finger on it.... went back a chap and almost crapped myself ... wonderful update! love it!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 00:37 PST
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Oh my god I fucking love this. Sorry for the profanity but I just couldn't contain myself. God I love this story and I am SO happy that there seems to be progress on the Inuyasha/Kagome front! This one really had me laughing at some parts too. The scene with them in the car where she goes "I don't have pants" had me in stitches. I could picture it perfectly. Really, really well done. The wait may have been long but it was so worth it. Thank you :D
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Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 23:07 PST
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Awesome chapter, and one of the hottest lemons yet. I'm glad they're talking again, and yet I still don't trust Naraku. Obviously he's nicer than I expected, but he acted a bit too oblivious with the hints to Inuyasha's true nature. If he doesn't figure it out on his own, he'll probably find out from his cousin.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 13:37 PST
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alright so we all know that was kikyo right? anybody else think she has photoshop? hehehe. can't wait to see what happens!!! the confrontation is about to begin. more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 13:37 PST
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alright so we all know that was kikyo right? anybody else think she has photoshop? hehehe. can't wait to see what happens!!! the confrontation is about to begin. more soon please!
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