| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Scriptix -nsi- On: March 01, 2010 00:44 PST
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Squee! I refreshed my inbox and saw this and was like *blink blink zomg* Damn, what a ride! In all sense of the word. I completely loved it - and that was totally hot. I love that he fucked his truck up. =] Also very glad that their relationship is moving on. I remember wanting to smack Kagome around a little bit through the last few chapters. Stubborn, thickheaded...
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 00:42 PST
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omg omg i was about to head to sleep, and it said email alert.. at first i was like what is shades of gray? sounds familiar.. cant put my finger on it.... went back a chap and almost crapped myself ... wonderful update! love it!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 00:37 PST
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Oh my god I fucking love this. Sorry for the profanity but I just couldn't contain myself. God I love this story and I am SO happy that there seems to be progress on the Inuyasha/Kagome front! This one really had me laughing at some parts too. The scene with them in the car where she goes "I don't have pants" had me in stitches. I could picture it perfectly. Really, really well done. The wait may have been long but it was so worth it. Thank you :D
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Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 23:07 PST
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Awesome chapter, and one of the hottest lemons yet. I'm glad they're talking again, and yet I still don't trust Naraku. Obviously he's nicer than I expected, but he acted a bit too oblivious with the hints to Inuyasha's true nature. If he doesn't figure it out on his own, he'll probably find out from his cousin.
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 13:37 PST
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alright so we all know that was kikyo right? anybody else think she has photoshop? hehehe. can't wait to see what happens!!! the confrontation is about to begin. more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 13:37 PST
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alright so we all know that was kikyo right? anybody else think she has photoshop? hehehe. can't wait to see what happens!!! the confrontation is about to begin. more soon please!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 14:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) took me a couple nights to catch up with you but hot damn! I love it. Cant wait to see more for this one :)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 10:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was awesome =D well worth the wait but hopefully the next update wont take as long... update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Leilachan ~nsi~ On: November 30, 2009 11:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! Is it true? Was she really doing naraku? Crazy. Either way, the mere possibility is enough to set yash off like a bomb. One sh*tty thing after the other. Poor kids. Hope real life takes a turn for the better for you. Hang in there, chica. *hugs* write when you can. We'll be here. : )
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Reviewed By: ohtarie On: November 29, 2009 23:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! I can't wait for the next chapter, are we going to find out who photo shopped the pictures?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(not loged in) On: November 29, 2009 07:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! really make you want to rattle some ones heads... I can't wait until a good thing happens in the story line... they have been down in the dumps for a while... though Rin "looks" better. I bet Sesshy and Rin get back together before Kagome is InuYasha!
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Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 05:45 PST
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truly amazing chapter, with cracked out miroku and everything. oh the angst!!! you're doing amazing, hope life is going better, and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 05:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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... I didn't expect that at all! Are those pictures fake ones sent by Naraku or... are they real? It couldn't be! And here I thought Inuyasha and Kagome would be reunited. I guess more yelling is coming around first. Well, oddly, I can't wait for some Inu/Kag spat. So far, Jiro and Miroku have been great. :D Hope you'll update soon. P.S. -- What's really creepy is that at some point, I'd wanted Miroku to end up with Kikyo, since he hated her so much. I don't know if I already told you that. It's just been on my mind a lot while reading this story. Ah.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 23:18 PST
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Oh no you didn't! I didn't see that coming at all. When you introduced the bit about Naraku and Kikyou I'd wondered where you were going to take it but this is SO MUCH juicier than anything my mind cooked up. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for posting and take all the time you need to for the next chapter. It's always worth the wait!
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Title: Ouch, My Bad
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm, Not Sign In On: November 28, 2009 23:03 PST
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Sorry, I put in the wrong name, I meant Mistakes, not Sacriface. I am so glad to see your voice again. I am no author, but I know that RL has a tendency to f*&k with people worse than Murphy. I am VERY glad you were able to post again. I look forward to the next update, whenever Life lets you do so.
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