| "Reflections" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: smichiko (not logged in, haha) On: February 23, 2007 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, this fic was good. I really, really loved the first chapter. It was just so perfect.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic!
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Title: Brillant!
Reviewed By: sangha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just checked this out and found it it highly entertaining!^___^ I liked the way you described the characters from their POVs! Well done!!
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Reviewed By: *misfit^.^muffin* On: March 17, 2006 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh and you captured mugen beautifly. I don't think I could have expressed him better. He kind of reminds me of spike, but mugen kinda more of a jerk...but I still love him *lol*
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Reviewed By: *misfit^.^muffin* On: March 17, 2006 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was truly awesome. This is the first champloo fic i've read and I think this is the best one i could have read. I rated all of the categories 10 because that's what they deserve. Honestly, If i could rate you higher I would. I really enjoyed reading your fic and I'm looking forward to reading the chapters you plan on adding.
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Reviewed By: peikingducktress On: March 17, 2006 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job!
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Reviewed By: peikingducktress On: March 17, 2006 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I hope to see more from you in the future!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all, I thought it was excellent. Maybe throw in a little more Jin, but he always was the *silent type*,lol. Still, I thought you did rather well with the characters. You are very talented indeed. Update soon.
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Title: Simply excellent!
Reviewed By: edouble On: February 13, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read a fic where the author captured Mugen's character so well. You are very talented! I look forward to the next update :D
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Title: Sorry for the dupe!
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: January 31, 2006 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
While both were fairly in character, of the two, I preferred Mugen's POV. The voice was more confident and more natural, with a good dose of Mugen's tough guy humor. Out of curiousity, which did you write first? Good pacing, good punctuation and grammar, entertaining. All in all, a solid effort. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us! Merci!
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: January 31, 2006 01:48 CST
Comment/Review:
While both were fairly in character, of the two, I preferred Mugen's POV. The voice was more confident and more natural, with a good dose of Mugen's tough guy humor. Out of curiousity, which did you write first? Good pacing, good punctuation and grammar, entertaining. All in all, a solid effort. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us! Merci!
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