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Title: good job
Reviewed By: arianna/ari On: March 07, 2006 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this its not for ppl under 17 ..but it was written preatty well i hope you continue cause you are leavinga cliff hanger jeez man hahaa -ari hope you also continue the other stories to
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 03, 2006 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome XD poor haru =P id love to see more on this story!! please update =)
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Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 16:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the one-shot but you had to leave a cliffie and thanks for the lyrics my friend has my chapters 6-8
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 24, 2006 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Well done. It had a nice citrus flavor to it & a cute story. Nice job!
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