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| "baptism of a flame demon" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: dsword On: March 07, 2006 07:50 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah, i was just waiting for ppl to review, i'll lengthen them now.
| Title: Can you?
Reviewed By: akashi471 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you leave longer chapters it's a bit of a let down to see a good story plot but only like a paragraph a chapter.
| Title: baptism of a flame demon reviews.
Reviewed By: dswordknight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
i know, reviewing my own fic, but come on, i need all kinds of critisium,tell me what you think. I want 5 reviews before i put the next chapter, and if you guys give me ideas, i just might dedicate a chapter to you!
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