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| "My Salvation" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 21:20 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE I WANT MORE!....pwease? x3
| Reviewed By: Sylvia Marri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very sweet, it touches the heart of the reader. Written beatifully in a prose-like manner, their joining was more like a beautiful poetry coming to a revealing conclusion. Very nicely done. It may seem a little one-sided but it was understandable since it was written in Mustang's POV. You gave Mustand a certain depth--thoughful musings, still not losing his wit, he even sounded a little mature (which is done well too since he SHOULD really "grow up" a little after five years right?) Overall, it's a very good short fic. =) More? And oh, Roy/Winry fanfic is really new to me, but hmm, they ARE an interesting pair, now that you've started it. Nice background stories to work with if you make them the lead chars... hmm. Very nice. :)
| Reviewed By: SnakeCharmersFoxx On: March 20, 2006 23:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good work with this pairing!
| Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 15:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I've never gave a Mustang/Wrinry fic much consideration before now. I really like this and the point of view was wonderfully written. Kudos and two thumbs up! ^_~
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