Reviewed By: Goddess of Night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there... It's pretty good for a start. You may want to add a bit more length to it. And you just need a little work on those death scenes. But overall, it was alright. Oh, and you have a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, you might want to work on that. Good jobby.
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