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| "Learning to Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's easier to hide behind the anger and conflict instead of facing the real issue... a habit... can be broken and new behavior established effectively after like two weeks... maybe this is a beginning of a new trend. sweet story, profound insight, nicely executed, well written. ~ thank you, ginny
| Title: Nice start. ^^
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice chapter to use as a start for your fanfic. I must say though, there wasn't very much plot introduction, just a typical day with Kags and Inu. It was a sweet moment though near the end. I thought your perspective on their relationship was original; that they've fallen into an endless spiral of conflict between the two of them. It was nice to see them come to some sort of agreement though. Still, there isn't much of anything else to comment about till you do another chapter with some plot in it so I'll have to wait and see to make further comments. ^^ Keep it up and I hope to read another chapter soon!
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