| "Needs a title" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. I hope you update soon. And I agree with what digiyash said I think Kari should keep the baby and she and TK could raise it together.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Wanky Tangy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahh I love the chapter title for this chapter!! It was so0o0o0o F-ing funny!! Another great chapter!!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I really cant wait to see how this story turns out!
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Reviewed By: Wanky Tangy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww T.K is s0o00o nice!! I love the way you wrote his character!!! You are such a good writer!!
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Reviewed By: Wanky Tangy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Second chapter was cute! I really liked the way you spaced out everything and LOVE the fact that Kair is in love with T.K. I love them together!
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Reviewed By: Wanky Tangy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That first chapter was so sad. I felt like crying during the whole thing! Please write more.
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Reviewed By: blind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I understand this used to be a Daikari. Not that I'm complaining or anything. Maybe you should name the title Second Chances.
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Title: Kari and TK
Reviewed By: digiyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm NOT telling you how to write your stories ... BUT IT WOULD BE SO AWESOME IF KARI GOT TO KEEP THE BABY AND HER AND TK RAISED IT TOGETHER! AWW!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww your story looked so lonely with out a review and since i notice it does not have i review i feel honored to give the first review: This is a good story but a sad one poor kari havin to go throu all that so young...Also what bout her brother tai is he gonna make an apperance like as her long lost brother or just another character in the story???? Well hope u update this story would be very intrestin to finshe it off and see what happens with the gang. Well Till next time LAter 4now!!!!
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