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| "The Bits and Pieces" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I can guess what Gojyo would say. **grins** And Sanzo and Hakkai, too, if they knew what Goku was thinking about. I'm so glad you updated this!
| Reviewed By: yagi-san On: June 26, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. I love Teaching Goku, but I think I love how you write Hakkai/Sanzo more. I agree totally with your portrayal of Hakkai. It makes so much sense the way you write it. You should definitely write some more of this pairing. You've made me want to read more, but I don't know if I'd like it without your style. XD Totally amazing. ^^
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These two chapters do help fill in the gaps in Teaching Goku. I look forward to more of these.
| Reviewed By: cylence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I was hoping I would get to see the other side of the story. Hakkai's "voice" in chapter 2 is just wonderful and his thoughts about his child and Goku were amazing. As I read both chapters it made me think how hard it is to understand the relationship between Sanzo and Gojyo, they just seem to constantly butt heads because their personalities are so different, but yet their pasts seem kind of similar in a wierd way. I think Sanzo has a lot of nerve calling Gojyo a whipped dog though, Sanzo is just as wounded and he barks way more :). Thanks for your hard work and I'm looking forward to more of both series!
| Reviewed By: hato-chan On: January 31, 2006 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the other two point of views are wonderful! i've been curious throughout the story about how the 'other couple' interprets the new relationship and their own. hakkai's pov is particularly moving for me ( 'course, i'm a sap at heart). when he thinks of the " little one", how he would have loved and accepted his sister's child as his own, it affected me to the point that my friend, who was lounging across the room while i sat at the computer, asked me what was wrong. " You have that look like a school bus full of kids was hit by an eighteen wheeler on the news." he said i looked totally grief stricken, it affected me that much. i really look forward to more from both sides. your writing continues to be excellently done, in style and character and i eagerly await the next update. have a good one!
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