Reviewed By: Abri On: June 22, 2004 01:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, I'm a pretty biased judge, but I loved it. I was SHOCKED AS ALL HELL to come across this story though. It was like, tra la la la, searching for hentai, this looks interesti- WTF, I'm a main character?!?! This has to be... what? 2, 3 years old? Well, the writing style was fantastic. I wish I could read the second chapter, because I know you wrote it. Steamy stuff with strawberries. Well, hope you're still alive out there.
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