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| "Miles 'Foxy' Prower!" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 23:33 CST
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I LOVE THIS STORY! YAY! DUDE, ARMIC JUST SOUNDS SO COOL THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED HIM... I FEEL THAT WAY SOMETIMES, TOO... NOT ALL THE TIME, JUST SOMETIMES... YEAH, THE IMAGERY IN THE STORY, I LOVE IT! IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE I'M IN THE STORY, WITNESSING WHAT'S GOING ON... IT IS SO COOL!!!!!!!! AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU MADE AMY CHANGE EMOTIONS LIKE THAT SO MUCH; IT WAS SO OSM... DEFINITELY ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE STORIES AND ONE OF THE BEST CHAPTERS OF THE STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! HEH, CAN'T BELIEVE I ACTUALLY FINISHED IT IN LESS THAN 30 MINUTES...... LOL YEAH, IT USUALLY TAKES ME LIKE AN HOUR TO READ THE CHAPTERS ON THIS STORY; NOT THAT I'M COMPLAINING OR ANYTHIN CUZ I LOVE THE LONGNESS(IF THAT'S EVEN A WORD, I DON'T CARE) BECAUSE IT KEEPS ME OCCUPIED IN SOMETHING ENTERTAINING THAT IS WORTH READING. AND I LOVE IT!!!!!!! TV SOMETIMES HAS IT'S REWARDS, BUT IT KINDA GETS BORING AFTER A WHILE... YEAH, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER... AND I WOULD READ THE OTHER STORY NOW, BUT CONAN'S ALMOST ON AND I HAVEN'T SEEN HIS SHOW IN FOREVER! AND I'D REALLY LOVE TO READ THE OTHER STORY NOW, BUT YOU KNOW, CONAN, HE'S JUST TOO HILARIOUS TO PASS UP... YEAH, BUT I WILL GET BACK TO READING IT LATER ON IN THE FUTURE, LIKE, TOMORROW MAYBE,*TALKING TO SELF* ALTHOUGH I HAVE TO DO MY CHORES THEN GO TO THE TRACK TO HELP MY MOM WITH OPENING INVENTORY... OH, SORRY... YEAH, WELL, OK... I'LL SEE WHAT I CAN DO ABOUT IT! LOL THAT SOUNDED QUEER... LOL OK, ENOUGH WITH THE QUEERNESS(ANOTHER WORD I DON'T THINK EXISTS)... YEAH, I LOVE THE SONG AT THE END OF THE CHAPTER! IT REALLY PUT A FUNNY PART INTO THE CHAPTER, CUZ THIS CHAPTER WAS MORE SERIOUS THAN FUNNY THIS TIME AROUND, BUT OF COURSE THE LAST, LIKE, 5-7 CHAPTERS HAVE BEEN THIS WAY, SO I GUESS IT DOESN'T MATTER AT THIS POINT... YEAH, I'VE KINDA WRITTEN WAY TOO MUCH NOW, BUT OF COURSE, YOU LIKE GETTING LONG REVIEWS DON'T YOU? I DO TOO, TOO BAD NO ONE'S REVIEWED YET, STUPID BASTARDS... JUST KIDDING! I LOVE YOU GUYS, WHOEVER READS THIS! JUST, WHATEVER... WELL, AGAIN, GREAT STORY! SORRY I'VE BEEN RAMBLING ON FOR, LIKE, EVER! I'M JUST THAT KIND OF PERSON, AND I DON'T KNOW WHY... WELL, WILL CATCH UP ON THE OTHER STORY SOON, AS YOU'VE SEEN MY REASONS ABOVE... YEAH... BYES! AND GREAT JOB, AGAIN, I MUST SAY. ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK(AGAIN) ALTHOUGH I KNOW YOU WILL... YOU ALWAYS WRITE GREAT STORIES/CHAPTERS FOR STORIES... YOU'D DO GREAT AS A WRITER, I THINK...
| Reviewed By: Watch For Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMFAO!!!!!! OK, I loved the song at the end! It kicked mondo @$$!!!! Loved it & you!!! WOOT! I loveded the stuff before the song too. SO Glad you let Armic live! I really like him! lol You're right about Amy having all those split-personality things. She's really got a few... Anywayz: UPDATE OR I WILL CASTRATE YOU! *twitch* Sorry, Evil Voice again...I guess Amy's not the only one with split personalities...
| Reviewed By: Crystalfox2 On: February 03, 2006 16:34 CST
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Sorry to hear about your story being deleted. (actually, I did wonder why I couldn't find it untill I read your profile). Anyway, even though it's relocated I'm gonna continue reading this 'cuz it's one of my favourite stories. Keep up the good work!
| Title: You never cease to amaze me!
Reviewed By: fairy-girl On: February 03, 2006 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! I'm sooooooooooo happy you updated!!! *hugs YiffyOne* I've had a really rubbish day up till now, but this chapter really cheered me up! I LOVED IT and I have to admit that I'm starting to really love Armic! (And it's rare for me to love OCs) He's just so cute, and I knew he wasn't a cold blooded murderer like his siblings! I'm so glad that he's going to be a good guy now! The idea of him being Amy's prisoner is so cute and funny lol! And I loved the way you made Amy so perceptive and understanding even thought she wasn't that strong in battle. Yay for Amy and Armic! Once again the action scene with the girls was brilliantly written, especially the parts when Rouge was fighting! Your talent never ceases to amaze me! Yay for girl power! I also really like the new, creative ways you're coming up with for insulting the evil incarnations of darkness at fanfiction.net! (MORONS! IDIOTS! IMBECILES!) The jingle song was really funny; I hope you give us faithful readers/reviewers more entertainment like that in the future! And I know that it's going to be difficult for you to match your previous total of over 200 reviews but just give it time. It won't be long before masses of them are pilling in along with mine, because let's face it, your story is awesome! There's only one little, tiny thing that could possibly make this story even more perfect... you guessed it, romance! Lol, you must be tired of hearing my pleas for Tails/Cream fluff by now but I can't help it! They are just so meant to be! *goes hyper with thoughts of Tails and Cream* ^_^ Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!! Don't make your loyal reviewers wait any longer than we have to! You know I'm dying to know what happens next! Keep up the great work Yiff!!
| Reviewed By: Sonto On: February 02, 2006 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since Chapter one on Fanfiction.net ( The basterds) and this is one of the best I've ever read! I can't wait until you get backto Tails' little ' power ' he finally discovered he had beacause of the chemical. Welp, update soon, because we all need our daily dosage of Miles ' Foxy' Prower!
| Title: Yay! It's continuing!
Reviewed By: Tega710 On: February 02, 2006 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most perfect fic ever! and I mean ever! not just in sonic the hedgehog, butin all of mediaminer and fanfiction.net!(Fanfic.net Must die a horrible, suffering, agonizing DEATH FROM WHICH THERE IS NO ESCAPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!). Phew, glad to get that out of my system. Anyway, this is the best fic ever! I have been a loyal fan of you, I have been reading Miles "Foxy" Prower since its debut at the new year! BTW Try to incorporate me into the next chappy, I am the only one from fancfic.net(DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) to post on mediaminer(i think). Please try to put me as a character (and not a gay one, a good one), but just in those pre and post-story skits that you should PUT BACK ON! I LOVE THIS STORY! I wounder how many chappies ther'll be... By the way, Yiffy, when someone says of course, its not "coarse" like you've been using. Other than that little thing, this is poifict! (To the tune of the flintstones) Fancfic.net is gay and should burn in hell eternity to the most hated website on the net I put a curse on you! Media-Miner is so much better than that gay-ass fanfiction.net Fancfic.net is gay and should burn in hell eternityyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
| Reviewed By: Speciall Ed On: February 02, 2006 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not see that coming. Great chapter, and I think you've written Armic as an extremely interesting OC. Just remember, even if you don't get many reviews, you still have a lot of fans, so don't take it too horribly when you don't get as many reviews as you wanted. Trust me, I've done it before, and I just ended up feeling annoyed with myself about it later.
| Title: Another Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Cyberbanjo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter. I'm glad to see that not ALL of the Emerald spirits are vicious killers. So.. Amy and Rouge can't remember what happened. I was going to ask if they could or not sooner or later. Oh, and about the lack of reviews, give it some time. It takes a while to accumulate a lot of fans. (even a great story like this) U pdate soon please!
| Title: bloody rules of fanfiction.net
Reviewed By: fanfiction.net slayer On: February 01, 2006 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
''To reduce spam, there is a short 3 day waiting period before new users are allowed to submit stories.'' stupid fanfiction oh well i have to wait 4 3 days ps im NOT going to reviw anymore... for now destroy fanfiction.net!
| Title: just a note
Reviewed By: fanfiction.net slayer On: February 01, 2006 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reviwed you 3 times in a row because u r good
| Title: die fanfiction.net die
Reviewed By: fanfiction.net slayer On: February 01, 2006 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi yiffyone I can see your sorrow and im making an anti-fanfiction.net fic in the name of haters like you kill fanfiction.net and your story rocks it shold go past the limit im going to post an anti-fanfiction.net fic on the sonic the hedgehog a.p.a.p. we all shold kill fanfiction.net with Mary sues, Gary Stus & nukes PS U R BETTER THAN GOD
| Title: fanfiction.net are real b*****ds
Reviewed By: fanfiction.net slayer On: February 01, 2006 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi yiffyone I can see your sorrow and im making an anti-fanfiction.net fic in the name of haters like you kill fanfiction.net and your story rocks it shold go past the limit im going to post an anti-fanfiction.net fic on the sonic the hedgehog a.p.a.p. we all shold kill fanfiction.net with Mary sues, Gary Stus & nukes hahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
| Reviewed By: luv shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DON'T WE ALL KNOW THAT?! LOL I LOVE THIS STORY AND NOW I AM FINALLY CAUGHT UP! YAY! I AM SO SMART, I AM SO SMART, S-M-R-T I MEAN S-M-A-R-T! LOL TO QUOTE ONE OF THE FUNNIEST, BALDEST, YELLOWEST MEN ON THE PLANET, HOMER JAY SIMPSON. LOL, WOW, I KNOW HIS WHOLE NAME... WEIRD... WELL, NOW I CAN FINALLY TELL YOU TO......................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .....................UPDATE SOON PLEASE! IF YOU LOVE ME YOU'LL UPDATE YOU LOVE ME RIGHT? LOL | Reviewed By: LUV SHADOW 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! YAY! GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! TRYING TO USE UP ALL OF THE CHARACTERS I CAN THERE!
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY SO FAR! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE REST! I LOVE THIS STORY, AS WELL AS THE AUTHOR! I LOVE YA YIFF!!!!!!!! LOL WELL, I LOVE THE FIGHTING SCENES, SO OSM AND INTENSE! SO COOL!
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