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| "Miles 'Foxy' Prower!" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ] | Reviewed By: LUV SHADOW 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, LIKE I SAID, GREAT STORY. I LOVE THE FIGHT SCENES THAT YOU CREATE! THEY ARE SO ORIGINAL AND ACTION-PACKED. AND PLUS IT IS SO MUCH BETTER WHEN SHADOW'S IN IT, SEEING AS HOW HE IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! GREAT JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT... AND I SO LOVE HIS GUN! LOL
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY, THIS IS ONE GREAT STORY ALL RIGHT! I LOVE IT. NOT TO WASTE TOO MUCH TIME CUZ I DON'T WANT TO GET BEHIND AGAIN. o.O; SO, THIS IS GONNA BE SHORT. GREAT JOB! (TOLD YA)...
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEW, TRYING TO GET ALL CAUGHT UP HERE, CUZ THAT'S WHAT WHAT'S HER FACE WANTED ME TO DO TODAY, AND EVERY OHTER DAY THAT I TALK TO HER! GIVE IT A REST. NOW SHE CAN'T YELL AT ME ANYMORE CUZ I'M READING IT! YAY! YEAH, YOU KNOW SHE STARTED SLAPPING ME AT SCHOOL THE OTHER DAY CUZ I WAS REALLY FAR BEHIND?! YEAH, SHE'S KINDA CRAZY... LOL GREAT JOB! I'LL TRY NOT TO REPEAT MYSELF THIS TIME, BUT NO GUARENTEES ON THAT EITHER... WELL, KEEP UP THE GREAT, GOOD, EXCELLENT(WHATEVER SOUNDS MORE APPEALING TO YOU, CUZ THEY'RE ALL TRUE!) WORK! YAY! OK, ANOTHER CHAPTER DOWN, 5 LEFT, WELL, UNTIL YOU PUT ANOTHER ONE UP, THEN IT WILL BE 6! o.O;
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHADOW IS THE ABSOLUTE COOLEST AND THE WHOLE VAMPIRE THING MAKES IT EVEN MORE COOLER(MORE COOLER, MORE COOL...) IDK BUT, YEAH, GREAT JOB! I'M NOT GONNA WRITE A LONG REVIEW IN FEAR OF YOU GETTING HOME AND UPDATING SO THAT I HAVE EVEN MORE TO READ! LOL YEAH... GREAT JOB, ONCE AGAIN(CURSES AT SELF FOR REPEATING SELF, YET AGAIN)
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! I LOVE IT! AND I LOVE HOW SONIC ACTUALLY THOUGHT THAT EGGMAN WAS AMY, SO STUPID, BUT WE ALL KNOW HE WOULD EVENTUALLY FIND OUT THE TRUTH... YEAH GREAT JOB I LOVE THIS STORY, AND I'M JUST REPEATING MYSELF LOL OH WELL... YAYZ! MAKING NO SENSE, I'M JUST GONNA SHUT UP NOW...(o.O;)
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I LOVE THE ACTION AND DRAMA THAT YOU PUT INTO IT. AND HOW YOU MADE SHADOW A MUTE(*TEAR*) WAS SO OSM! I LOVED IT! OF COURSE, YOUR STORY IS LIKE,THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ! LOL GREAT JOB ON IT, AND YES, FANFICTION IS SUCH A GAY ASS SITE, I FUCKING HATE THEM... ANYWAYS, I LOVE THIS STORY, AND I'M SO GLAD THAT WE HAVE FOUND ANOTHER SITE, CUZ I'M NOT DONE WITH IT AND IF THERE WASN'T ANOTHER SITE OUT THERE, I'D BE DOOMED!!!!!!!!!!! LOL GREAT JOB! ;)
| Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY. SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO GET CAUGHT UP(AND I PROBABLY WON'T GET ALL CAUGHT UP TODAY EITHER!) BUT YEAH, SINCE I'M HOME SICK TODAY, I SAID, WELL, I HAVEN'T READ ANYMORE OF HIS STORY, AND NOW I FEEL BAD. SO, I AM NOW READING IT! LOL AND I MUST SAY, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! YAY! I'LL TRY TO GET ALL CAUGHT UP, NO GUARNTEES IT WILL BE TODAY THOUGH...
| Reviewed By: Cross Rabbit On: January 29, 2006 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They...DELETED your fanfic...? I can't believe it!! That is SO unfair. Well, this may be a blessing because, now I can review you. Anyway, YAYAYAYAYAYAY!! You sure do know how to spice up some dull characters. I mean, giving Tails such a kick@$$ machine... It's pure GENIUS! You know I love this story, as I've said before, so if you don't update I will be forced to e-mail you a bomb. Just kidding!! But I DO want and update soon! Again, it really sucks how they just up and deleted you like that. But I can see, you could care less. DSon't let them get you down. You're still a great writer and always will be. Never the less, I'm still going to stay on FF.net. Don't take it personally, they were wrong for what they did, but I keep in touch with my cousin this way. I might start putting stories here too, though. Anyway, LOVE THIS CHAP! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! TALK TO YOU SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: Speciall Ed On: January 29, 2006 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about your story being deleted. You know you can repost it, right? THat would please many authors on the site. Even if you don't repost back on FFnet, it's still one of the best stories I've read. And of all the action scenes in th story, this had to be the best, even better than Knuckles, which was also awesome.
| Title: It continues!
Reviewed By: Tails11 On: January 28, 2006 22:42 CST
Comment/Review:
YiffyOne! I'm glad to see you're continuing the story! I can't see a good reason why Fanfiction deleted it. This chapter is one of your best yet! I hope you continue! Faithful reader, Tails11 (from Fanfiction.net)
| Reviewed By: Cyberbanjo On: January 27, 2006 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. I feel really bad about what happened to your story on Fanfiction.net My favorite story of 2003 was deleted as well. FIRST BOREDOM AND THEN MILES 'FOXY' PROWER?! I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS FANFICTION.NET!!!!!!!! Sorry about that. This chapter was really good. Hey, a question, would Tail's scent affect the female emerald spirits (assuming that more are left. I can't keep track -_-; ) Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Good chapter.
| Title: sorry
Reviewed By: mel-sama On: January 27, 2006 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i've been reading your fanfic in fanfiction.net and didn't review... :( screw me. well heres my review and i hope tis fine... the chaos troupe thing is a cool idea.. and ya you've been in teh 'actioney' state and not really in romance lately... still good though. THAT'S SO MEAN SCREW FANFICTION.NET!!!! that sucks when one of the kick-butt fanfics are deleted! whats the point of deleting fanfics cuz its in skit dialect? stupid idiots. i like the way u kill da troupe... only 1 more left. you handicapped everyone cept tails! maybe cuz he has to be in one piece to see cream.. yaya probably. the chris and cream thing is cool though even if it tis cross species *shudders* its wrong but the way you put it it sounds good... weird. knuckles' eye isn't gonna work anytime soon is it? *cries for 5 days and five nights* oh well i have a plushie!! *huggles knux plushie* mmmmm toasty. "At least I CAN fly, Fartimus!" and "At least I don't fly with my ass..." that was funny. i was laughin and laughin till i choked and decided to stop. tails is cool older and so tis everyone else. i really like tails but everyone else seems the same > its kinda creepy that rouge is now 22 and she tried to rape 15 yr old tails. *shudders again* kinda creepy and all ya know? i do kinda have some sympathy for Artimus... he didn't know that technology but he died as a good warior... *moment of silence* that was a good and kind of unfair death.... you know haw teh kill people! first shadow and his 'hit ur own team mate' then teh 'break da neck momment' then the 'good ol' cremium' and then knuckles and the 'hit da heart!' then chris' 'blow to the head' finnally tails' 'trusty Typhoon assult.' those were alot of butt-kickin. i like the way you think yiffy-san *snickers* cream has a cold so when tails comes over to her and shes all lovey over him he'll think its the aroma perfume thing, not herself. your good and i congrat u... thats me review, so bye! ~mel-sama~ *good good, i like the way u write and u update fast too yiffy-san!*
| Reviewed By: x Vampire-Heart x On: January 27, 2006 16:37 CST
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This chapter is awesome ^_^ Artimus is pure evil...>.<
LET'S KILL HIM! And fanfiction =P love, x Vampire-Heart x
| Reviewed By: Watch For Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
WOOT!AWESOME AWESOMNESS!!!!! LOV YA Yiff! SO MUCH! LOL! WOOT! Great chapter! Yes, we all know that fanfic.net is GAY!!!!!!!! DIE FANFICTION.NET!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DIE!!!!!! OK, I'm better DIE! now! WOOT! Awesome chapter! Oh ya, Tails kicked ass! WOOT! & There was some romance when Tails was thinking about Cream! lol You are a genius & I luv ya! Keep Writing!
| Reviewed By: fairy-girl On: January 27, 2006 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya YiffyOne!! It's me again! Ok, before I get started on praising you for the ultimate awesomeness of your writing abilities, let me just get this out of the way... OMG, I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT FANFICTION.NET DELETED YOUR STORY!!! HOW DARE THEY!! *eyes blaze with flames of indignation and fury* I really, really, really hate them for doing that to you!! Anyone can tell from reading your story just how much work you put into it and how awesome it is! I don't care if skits are against the rules; they were brilliant and made me laugh every time! I'm just glad that I managed to review all your other chapters before it happened, shame they all got deleted though. STUPID FAFNFICTION.NET!!! Phew, I'm glad I could get that off my chest lol. This chapter was amazing! You are truly wonderful at writing actions scenes! I'm jealous, I can't write them at all. Yay! I'm so happy that Tails has finally got a piece of the action! That Artimus was a fool if he thought he could kill off my favourite furry hero! *sighs happily* Tails is so cool! And he's sooooooo in love with Cream, even if he doesn't realise it yet. Though I'm a little concerned about him wanting to experiment on her. But Cream has a cold right? Doesn't that mean that she won't be able to smell him? Oooooooh, I can't wait for the romance to unfold! But I know that when it finally does, you'll make it absolutely amazing! So I can wait. For a little while anyway. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work; I'm looking forward to the next chapter already! Till next time, fairy-girl
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