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| "Miles 'Foxy' Prower!" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: YiffyOne??
Reviewed By: Tails11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 15:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. This is Tails11, just checking in. Noticed you haven't updated in a while. I have been checking pretty much daily to see if theres a new chapter. Just thought I would let you know we miss you and your stories! Update when you can! -Tails11
| Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: BlackKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 01:03 CDT
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This is a Great story.Extremely funny when it is supposed to be. And I can't get enough.
| Reviewed By: bubblepop On: September 23, 2006 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is is the best story I've read in a long time! Why haven't you updated since june? come on! that is the best of the best in sonic fanfiction in my perception. Just continue it already, because I fell from your super high CLIFFhanger and it's gonna kill me if you don't continue that fanfiction! You added a lot of character, to your characters. Some that I don't think I've heard of in the games! your plot is good. It's an exciting story...no I take that back cause that's an understatement! IT'S A THRILLING STORY WITH LOTS OF DETAILS, THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF SUSPENSE, HILARIOUS COMEDY, AND IS AN ABSOLUTLY SATISFYING STORY DOWN TO THE LAST DEGREE SO FAR. I LOVE IT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE RETURN TO WRITING THE STORY FOR I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT IT`12~@
| Title: God exists!
Reviewed By: TheVulpineHero1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic kicks rear. Your fic is mainly what inspired me to write some of my own. Up yours, J.K Rowling, YiffyOne is in town!
| Reviewed By: Bikermattus On: June 28, 2006 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I'm a hard "taskmaster", but I'm used to a high quality. Seriously, since I rate a "5" to be pretty good in the field (the average ff genuine attempt is pretty good, and marks the beginning of "published" quality), your work is right up there. I just started reading this yesterday. One note, though... ff.net is a separate entity from the infamous "den of voles" (to quote a friend) fanfiction newt (no, I refuse to refer to it correctly ;P). once my life simplifies a bit, I plan to write my own... maybe even a game, if I can get permission. The story (as of ch. 15) has a... unique twist. A little over the top, but it seems to be smoothing out nicely. I look forward to seeing how it flows along! btw, I saw your art. If you were inclined to write graphic art, even as a webcomic, you would do well!
| Title: Awesomw with a capital AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Tails Is The Coolest Fox Who Ever Lived!!! On: June 22, 2006 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really awesome, loved you making up the whole concept of Crystology, from scratch... quality. All of it, from the beginning with Tails and Sonic in the workshop, to the battle with the Titan, up to this... it's all quality. After 19, I had kinda given up on any more updates after about a month. Keep the updates coming!
| Title: Destron Commander
Reviewed By: Black Convoy On: June 14, 2006 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thats IT? just this? Youm WILL update soon or... have ou developrd a fear of bug black tanker trucks? You may need it...
| Reviewed By: Tails11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was getting worried about you. Checked your stpries almost every day for however long it was since chapter 21. Anyway, excellant chapter, and bonus points for making Crystology. I understand it completely! Traditional Vampire Shadow (I liked your Spectre of the Night comment) and poor Armic. Almost got attacked by Rouge, that was hysterical! I look forward to your next chapter and hope you update as fast as humanly possible! I have an account now! Yay!
| Title: you'd better be back soon! lol
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14* On: June 13, 2006 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE... THIS IS AN OSM STORY SO FAR! I'VE SAID THAT TOO MANY TIMES BUT IT'S TRUE! OK... SHADOW IS THE FRIGGIN BEST! LOL HE'S SO COOL AS A VAMPIRE, TOO... AND ROUGE TRYING TO USE CHAOS CONTROL? HOW WEIRD IS THAT? BUT IT'S COOL! LOL OK, WELL, LOOKS LIKE I WON'T BE GIVING MY DOG A BATH TODAY, SEEING AS HOW IT'S RAINING NOW... THAT GAY ASS TROPICAL STORM BETTER NOT BECOME A HURRICANE... IT WOULD RUIN ALL OF ME VACATION PLANS... ANYWAY, GREAT STORY AGAIN! I LOVE IT! LOL ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
| Title: And I finally get around to readin' it...
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: June 12, 2006 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short my ass! Well, compared to most of your other chs then yeah, short. I hate short...lol Hmm...Rouge's clothes won't let her use Chaos Control...lol That's fah! And of course Shadow would be watching... He's all mysterious and crap... *rolls eyes* lol Sorry, (human) Amy! lol The whole use of chakra thing was clever, but most of your stuff is so yeah. lol Not a big shock there. I do wanna know where Armic is so you'd better update soon, pally! I'll be ticked if you don't! lol kk, BYEZ! ~_^
| Reviewed By: i.am.someone On: June 12, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you finally updated and its......er....well..... great i guess lol and no it wasn't that short at all. all hail the great YiffyOne.
| Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! That chapter was great! Please check out my story and talk to Star about it. She'll explain the rest.
| Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: Yamekanur* On: June 11, 2006 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I really dont care for Rouge that much, I still did like this chapter as well as I liked all the other chapters. Please dont make Armic into some kind of a bad-guy though. He's so cool. The chapter was very creative and pretty well thought out, however some parts can be confusing.... But forget that. Keep writing.
| Title: did you read my mind??
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
becaue in my fic shadow told her how to use chaos control of not a real big conn wink a dink oh well keep dongig whatyou do best and let us know when we attack
| Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! You've finally returned to the land of the living!! *hugs* For a while there I thought you'd given up on this wonderful fic of yours. But you haven't! And your story is just as awesome as it always was, if not more so! I'm afraid that I must ask you to excuse my hyper-ness in this review, as my end of year exams have recently finished so I am in a really good mood! And this brilliant update of yours has made me even happier! (As your updates always do.) Don't worry, I didn't think this chapter was too short at all, and the quality of writing still manages to blow me away! You haven't lost your touch Josh! So in answer to your question - yes, this chapter was very, VERY good!!! ^_^ To be completely honest, I found it absolutely fascinating, I was literally glued to the screen until I finished reading it. The intricate details you used to describe the Crystology, Chakra and how it all works was simply amazing, and all totally believable. I actually felt like I was reading about the lost arts of a real ancient civilisation - it was soooooooooo cool!! (I'm really into ancient magic and things like that lol, just another one of the reasons why I love your story so much.) I still can't believe that you came up with this whole idea yourself! There are so many deft, original touches in this story - you are truly a very skilful writer! I promise that I'm not just saying these things to flatter you; I only say them because I think that you and your writing deserve to be praised. I love how you describe and explain every little detail of the character and their movements, making them seem more real - like at the beginning when Rouge was struggling to hold all her thoughts together in her mind, and how she felt when she became conscious of her own power after she'd awakened. I love your own, original characters (especially Armic!!) and you make me actually care about them and want to learn more about them. And most of all, I love how you skilfully lace bits of humour throughout your story, no matter how serious or desperate or mysterious a situation might be, so I can always find something that makes me laugh. Like when Rouge bashfully asked Armic if she could say 'Chaos Control' out loud, just so she would sound cool and impressive, and when Armic told her that "we need to get you out of those clothes"! Rouge's reaction was hilarious!! Lol, now I'm imagining Rouge in loose fitting, floaty robes! Shadow's right, Rouge plus time control definitely doesn't bode well, hee, hee! Also (I know that I've probably said all this before but I can't remember exactly, so sorry if I'm repeating myself.), the way you've linked the wonderful idea of the Crystal Kingdom in with Sonic's world and the Chaos emeralds is pure genius, and not for one minute have I thought that something in your story didn't fit with the Sonic universe as I know it. Oh, and you are so evil! Disappearing for ages then coming back and giving us a cliffy!! ^_~ I'm so curious, what is Armic up too? And what's so special about that crystal that he wanted to hide it from Rouge? And now Shadow is following him… I wonder if he'll notice. Ooooooooooooh, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Yay, you said you'd be back soon with another update! I'm looking forward to it already! Your fic is addictive, I've decided. People read it and they just can't get enough! I want more!! Wow… I've been babbling haven't I? Sorry about that, I just love reviewing your fic! Till next time! ~Jen
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