| "Portal into the Unknown" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: moongirl On: August 22, 2002 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Moongirl: I love it. I don't watch a lot of DBZ
but I love the parings.
Meline: I don't I wanted LI!!!!!!!!!!
Sakura: He's mine.*Holding Li*
Li:I need help. I know I'm good looking.
Eil and Madison: No your not.
Harry and the other people: Let's go home.
BACK AT VILDE HOME.
He father: I bet she's with a boy. I'll kill him.
Japan Sakura's room
Kero:* Passed out* Need Food
Moongirl: Alright write soon. |
Reviewed By: lala On: July 03, 2002 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like the story, keep it up. is this before majin buu cuz if it was then wouldn't videl freak out about gohan's tail? |
Reviewed By: dwm On: April 17, 2002 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice job keep those chapters coming |
Reviewed By: duo maxwell On: April 15, 2002 03:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic so far please put up the next chapter soon |
Reviewed By: Lemon and Lime On: February 24, 2002 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just adore this story. Even though I've never watched a single episode of DBZ, I enjoyed it. I do have background knowledge on Harry Potter and CCS. Great couples by the way...Ron with Meilin...that should get interesting! Anyway, can't wait to hear more from you! I'll be looking for the next chapter! Make them longer! Onegai!! |
Reviewed By: kate On: February 24, 2002 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls continue this i love it and its exciting |
