|
| "King of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: smexy_Kato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as I hate to say this but this story makes NO sense what so ever. The yaoi scene's weren't detailed, and well to put it simply it was rather boring. You should've built up sora and alex's relationship instead of just throwing them together and having them give each other "big hugs" and kisses. If you'd like I can help you through that, enabling you to write more explicit sex scenes. Check out my work and decide whether you want something that graphic or not. If so let me know, and I'll be more than happy to assist you.
| Title: I FOUND OUT, BITCH!
Reviewed By: YaoiNova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you posted this! I'm gonna get HELL from readers!
|
|
|
