| "Come Undone" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: poisoncandi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story caught my attention because of the creativity of it. poor sakura trying to spy on her beloved sensei! please continue it i can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: onekenshinlover On: February 10, 2006 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the originality.. I like also that the story doesn't seem rushed... I'm waiting for someting substantial to happen, like for Kakashi to tell Sakura he knows she was told to spy on him or somthing.. Anyway, can't wait until the next update...
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Reviewed By: Imoshen On: January 29, 2006 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although the starting time-frame was a bit confusing at first, I quickly got over it. Your idea was refreshing and I'm looking foward to further developments. Your story peaked my intrest.
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Reviewed By: Imoshen On: January 29, 2006 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although the starting time-frame was a bit confusing at first, I quickly got over it. Your idea was refreshing and I'm looking foward to further developments. Your story peaked my intrest.
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